Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I was going to wait until Mañana to do this. Review of your wonderful story. But I thought well maybe I shouldn't procrastinate. So here we go we're giving you ever you on your delightful story. Keep writing and sharing, and I will keep reading and reviewing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2023

Comment from estory

Excellent

The older you get, the harder it is to find the motivation to dig into things like books and chores. I thought the dialogue was witty and the personality between the two selves is great counterpoint. estory

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This is cute. Your conversation with yourself is an engaging dialogue and easy to follow due to the color coding. Your English is good, in fact, better than some native speakers.

I think there is one spot that you want to change the font to green
"What?"

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you Debi, and praise the Lord for the new Grammarly:) chat-pat in the box:)

Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

You hit the nail on the head and described me to a "T". I am a master procrastinator. I can start a project two weeks early and miss the deadline by a week. An enjoyable read. I identified with everything you wrote and have used all the excuses you've described. Thanks for sharing it. Frank

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you so much Frank, please do let me know when you find a cure:)

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading and completely understand. I've hit that area with me working out. I'm telling myself, I have too many things to do at home to go work out. So far, I'm still working out. Don't know how long it will last. I have to admit I feel better after I do.

" Manana!" Move quotation mark closer to 'Manana' in two different areas)

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you, and please do share the receipt, I am fading after two days of keeping with a program:)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I've watched you grow as a writer over the years, and I'm pleased for you, you're doing well, you are adjusting and you will be a good writer Iza, you are doing very well indeed, very well done, good dialogue, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you so much Mr. Roy and praise the Lord for the new Grammarly:) chat-pat in the box:)

reply by royowen on 24-Jul-2023

That?s good

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I love these skits where you talk to you alterego. I think your English is fine and I wouldn't open those books either if I could use another language as well as you do. I've got Spanish courses sitting around unused and like you, I don't throw them out because I'll get to them manana.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you so much Ms. Beth, and praise the Lord for the new Grammarly:) chat-pat in the box:) and I do have an impressive stash of Spanish books as well:)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This "manana" syndrome affects a lot of people and it is getting more widespread all the time. I am going to address my own problem with it very, very soon.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Please if you find le cure, do share:)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Procrastinating is common among most people, including me.

Procrastinating is a danger. People can end up with getting nothing done. Nothing!

You are smart to use dialogue to show procrastinating is equal to tomorrow.

I enjoy the dialogue.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you so much for taking a chance on this little piece:)

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Okay, very cute. You should have entered this in the dialogue only cash contest.

Something happened in the second to last sentence with symbols:
again?"

" Ma�?�±ana?"

I enjoyed this one, my friend!

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023

Yup I don't know how to make it look like in Spanish, sorry

reply by Douglas Goff on 23-Jul-2023

Ahhh. I wondered why it does that so much. Interesting! Still a great story, my friend.

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

Thank you so much Sir, and how is Chief doing ? Is he going to catch the old bag of sorcery?

reply by Douglas Goff on 24-Jul-2023

We are at the last chapter!

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023

nooooooooooooooo