Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "A Dear Joyous Wee Bear"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
10 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Hey, Liz
This is so very cute. The names are awesome for children and i found myself enjoying them too!
A couple of small catches:
black eyed susans.
(black-eyed)
Last paragraph:
struggle to begin something again, Seeing it come to fruition is
(Switch the comma for a period or decap 'Seeing')
Very enjoyable. I like the chapters I read!
D
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Hey, Liz
This is so very cute. The names are awesome for children and i found myself enjoying them too!
A couple of small catches:
black eyed susans.
(black-eyed)
Last paragraph:
struggle to begin something again, Seeing it come to fruition is
(Switch the comma for a period or decap 'Seeing')
Very enjoyable. I like the chapters I read!
D
Comment Written 28-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your alert appreciative review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Best wishes as you moved forward from this book. I understand moving forward and adding it more once you create those future memories. I can empathize with Bea on some level. The part:
[She believes that is possible to all as we struggle to begin something again, Seeing it come to fruition is our a reward for our efforts carried out little by little.!]
The way I hace managed adversities like a past divorce, being diagnosed and living with MS, being a single mother who was also teacher children and teens with special needs and earning masters degree in Literacy, I had to do it all little by little step by step. I wouldn't have made it any other way.
Alexandra:))
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Best wishes as you moved forward from this book. I understand moving forward and adding it more once you create those future memories. I can empathize with Bea on some level. The part:
[She believes that is possible to all as we struggle to begin something again, Seeing it come to fruition is our a reward for our efforts carried out little by little.!]
The way I hace managed adversities like a past divorce, being diagnosed and living with MS, being a single mother who was also teacher children and teens with special needs and earning masters degree in Literacy, I had to do it all little by little step by step. I wouldn't have made it any other way.
Alexandra:))
Comment Written 28-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Wow, Thank you for the wonderfully meaningful review. I'm glad it spoke to you.
Comment from Sally Law
Precious ending to the book and victory over the bully with kind supportive friends. Bee is no longer Wee inside herself.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Liz.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Precious ending to the book and victory over the bully with kind supportive friends. Bee is no longer Wee inside herself.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Liz.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. I like what you said: " Bee is no longer Wee inside herself." A nice tribute...I thank and Bea thanks you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
'not how can I or can I but, I can.' On the first day of first grade, I always read my first graders 'The Little Engine that Could'. I wanted them to get into the mindset that they could. Thank you for sharing this with us. I can't wait to read your autobiography.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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'not how can I or can I but, I can.' On the first day of first grade, I always read my first graders 'The Little Engine that Could'. I wanted them to get into the mindset that they could. Thank you for sharing this with us. I can't wait to read your autobiography.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. I appreciate your enthusiasm toward my ensuing autobiography
y
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Moving around out in the sun with the good, the bad and the ugly but mostly with the joy of seeing life through the sweet eyes of the innocence's.Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Moving around out in the sun with the good, the bad and the ugly but mostly with the joy of seeing life through the sweet eyes of the innocence's.Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from lyenochka
Great conclusion for this third book of Bea books! I really liked : "Her exercises, especially strolling and doing her talk to the maker had helped her become more wee, more trusting in the maker and friends."
I liked that she didn't ask to become BIG or Stronger but she humbly accepted her wee self and welcomed new friends who became her support as she continued her talk with the Maker and growing in trust and faith. Great lessons from Bea bear!!
Comments:
Willows words for her to remember, (Willow's)
She [verb?] not so lonely and independent,
When Bea told Sophia what was happening she (it would help to know whether the "she" was Sophia or Bea.)
again, Seeing it come to fruition is our a reward (period instead of comma. "our" without the "a")
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Great conclusion for this third book of Bea books! I really liked : "Her exercises, especially strolling and doing her talk to the maker had helped her become more wee, more trusting in the maker and friends."
I liked that she didn't ask to become BIG or Stronger but she humbly accepted her wee self and welcomed new friends who became her support as she continued her talk with the Maker and growing in trust and faith. Great lessons from Bea bear!!
Comments:
Willows words for her to remember, (Willow's)
She [verb?] not so lonely and independent,
When Bea told Sophia what was happening she (it would help to know whether the "she" was Sophia or Bea.)
again, Seeing it come to fruition is our a reward (period instead of comma. "our" without the "a")
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for appreciative review and your sharp eye. I have attended to your observations.
Comment from aryr
Because you finished your book, Liz! This was a joyous situation. I have learned so much about Bea the Wee Bear and all of her friends. She also learned from her bullies because she did in fact learn from them. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Bright blessings n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Because you finished your book, Liz! This was a joyous situation. I have learned so much about Bea the Wee Bear and all of her friends. She also learned from her bullies because she did in fact learn from them. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Bright blessings n hugs!!!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed Bea.
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You are so welcome, Liz. It was an honor on my part.
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***Hugs***
Comment from patcelaw
What I have been able to read if your series has been an exciting little breed and I enjoyed it very much. You are a very good writer. I wish you. What I have been able to read if your series has been an exciting little read and I enjoyed it very much. You are a very good writer. I wish you the very best in all of your writing, and in your new book I wish you the best as well.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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What I have been able to read if your series has been an exciting little breed and I enjoyed it very much. You are a very good writer. I wish you. What I have been able to read if your series has been an exciting little read and I enjoyed it very much. You are a very good writer. I wish you the very best in all of your writing, and in your new book I wish you the best as well.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. You know anything you read in my portfolio requires no review, just enjoy.
Comment from country ranch writer
Hoping the bear poker has learned his lesson about how hurtful it was to be poked himself.we can only hope!
Seems everything else wee bear has under her control. They kitty is settling in quite nicely.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Hoping the bear poker has learned his lesson about how hurtful it was to be poked himself.we can only hope!
Seems everything else wee bear has under her control. They kitty is settling in quite nicely.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from JSD
So sweet and satisfying as an ending. Well done and good luck with the book too. I enjoyed your child-friendly description no end.
John x
"Poetry is the space between words."
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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So sweet and satisfying as an ending. Well done and good luck with the book too. I enjoyed your child-friendly description no end.
John x
"Poetry is the space between words."
Comment Written 23-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
