A Walking Miracle
Sometimes miracles are not what they appear to be!6 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Mario,
This is a well written entry for the 100 Word Dash contest. It is full of inspiration and humor. Your use of dialogue in the form of a conversation to tell the story is excellent.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Mario,
This is a well written entry for the 100 Word Dash contest. It is full of inspiration and humor. Your use of dialogue in the form of a conversation to tell the story is excellent.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much, Eugene, for your kind and encouraging review!!!
Comment from Lola G
I cannot love this enough! What a wonderfully written joke that starts out like a believable memoir. I am a fan and hope to read more of your work. Keep it coming.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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I cannot love this enough! What a wonderfully written joke that starts out like a believable memoir. I am a fan and hope to read more of your work. Keep it coming.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review, Lola!!!!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Look at that: even in church, theft begets theft! Someone steals Ralphie's car, so he has no choice but to steal someone's cane. There is something so Biblical in that, I feel, isn't there?...Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Look at that: even in church, theft begets theft! Someone steals Ralphie's car, so he has no choice but to steal someone's cane. There is something so Biblical in that, I feel, isn't there?...Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much, Rachelle!!
Comment from PENofFIRE
It is always a pleasure seeing how we writers can take the same prompt and come up with different stories. I loved yours and the ending was priceless. Best wishes in the contest.
Pen of Fire
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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It is always a pleasure seeing how we writers can take the same prompt and come up with different stories. I loved yours and the ending was priceless. Best wishes in the contest.
Pen of Fire
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much!!! I like your pen name.... writers must have some fire at the tip of their pen!!!
Thanks for the kind review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A gift in one hand and a theft in the other? A fun post and you made me smile here, a fine 100 word dash. A miracle indeed and I have seen a few, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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A gift in one hand and a theft in the other? A fun post and you made me smile here, a fine 100 word dash. A miracle indeed and I have seen a few, ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Hello Dolly,
Thank you so much. Glad it made you smile!!!
Comment from lancellot
I would advise against the overly large font. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
{"}Ralph ignored his friend's remark and continued:
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"That's the thing. Someone stole it from the parking lot.["]
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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I would advise against the overly large font. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
{"}Ralph ignored his friend's remark and continued:
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"That's the thing. Someone stole it from the parking lot.["]
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your review, Lancelot. I didn't understand what to add.... remove the sentence ' that's the thing etc...add what please
Thank you for clarifying!!
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You got it.
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Hey Lancellot,
Thanks lots +++
Already changed the font and corrected the punctuation.
You have a sharp eye!!!
