Our Free Gift
It all comes from God!9 total reviews
Comment from karenina
A Naani should bring a simple message, in my opinion...and this is the most basic of all... God had created a world of poetry in motion with nature...and all we have to do is look and be blessed!
Karenina
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A Naani should bring a simple message, in my opinion...and this is the most basic of all... God had created a world of poetry in motion with nature...and all we have to do is look and be blessed!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
Comment from Teri7
Jim, This is a very well written Naani poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words and the imagery you chose went well with your words. All true and enjoyable to read. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Jim, This is a very well written Naani poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words and the imagery you chose went well with your words. All true and enjoyable to read. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Thqnk you v3ry much!@
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. And yes, as the author states, Creation is God's Gift! I thought the author's words were very creative, in such a short poem all was said! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. And yes, as the author states, Creation is God's Gift! I thought the author's words were very creative, in such a short poem all was said! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much!
Comment from BethShelby
You are right. All of creation is a gift of God. He has given us many gifts and each day the fact that he walks with us and loves us is an amazing gift but the best one was the gift of his son to give us eternal life.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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You are right. All of creation is a gift of God. He has given us many gifts and each day the fact that he walks with us and loves us is an amazing gift but the best one was the gift of his son to give us eternal life.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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You said it!
Comment from Paul Manton
A very pleasant and lightly humorous poem, looking into the Garden of Eden for inspiration. Yes, God created us to be stewards of all we can see - and look what a poor job we have made of it!
Nevertheless, God has not withdrawn His mandate - we still have a duty of care to our planet - and if that includes writing about it, why not offer the Creator our very best poetry.
A good 25 syllable Naani poem, with a great picture for reference. A strong final line - with a humorous twist and a perfect rhyme. Well, I have pulled up my chair - and I have greatly enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
Paul
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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A very pleasant and lightly humorous poem, looking into the Garden of Eden for inspiration. Yes, God created us to be stewards of all we can see - and look what a poor job we have made of it!
Nevertheless, God has not withdrawn His mandate - we still have a duty of care to our planet - and if that includes writing about it, why not offer the Creator our very best poetry.
A good 25 syllable Naani poem, with a great picture for reference. A strong final line - with a humorous twist and a perfect rhyme. Well, I have pulled up my chair - and I have greatly enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
Paul
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you! I enjoyed your comments!
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Welcome.
Paul
Comment from Lea Tonin1
We need that sometimes in a world of strife and disappointment. I thank you for that!
The third line of your palm is my favorite and strikes accord with me.
It's like stop and smell the roses. Pickle, take a deep breath and get over yourselves for just 5 minutes!
I see no issues with grammar or aesthetics and find this to be a well wrtten poem and a fine submission. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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We need that sometimes in a world of strife and disappointment. I thank you for that!
The third line of your palm is my favorite and strikes accord with me.
It's like stop and smell the roses. Pickle, take a deep breath and get over yourselves for just 5 minutes!
I see no issues with grammar or aesthetics and find this to be a well wrtten poem and a fine submission. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate the forum to try different forms of poetry and prose.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Enjoying nature and just breathing in life is a good way of appreciating what we have and all of it is free, I enjoyed your faithful touch here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Enjoying nature and just breathing in life is a good way of appreciating what we have and all of it is free, I enjoyed your faithful touch here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your very kind words!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Poetry hangs in the trees:) This is so true: "Pure poetry all around us
So enjoy! Pull up a chair!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Poetry hangs in the trees:) This is so true: "Pure poetry all around us
So enjoy! Pull up a chair!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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And thank you for your comments!
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a fine poem for this contest. I wish you well with it. Your picture choice was perfect, and your change of color for the last line enhanced the presentation. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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This is a fine poem for this contest. I wish you well with it. Your picture choice was perfect, and your change of color for the last line enhanced the presentation. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you very, very much!