Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Absolutely beautiful. Peaceful, tranquil, soothing. You've done such a beautiful job with your words here, and then you found the perfect picture to accompany it. Very nicely done, Mystery Poet! Good luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023

I appreciate your feedback.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Such a lovely poem a great example of the Naani. I especially adore the picture you chose, beautiful.
"To see God's tapestry" That's a gorgeous line adorable.
Having said that, I see no issues with grammar or aesthetics it is visually pleasing. And your poem rolls off the tongue.
Good job and find addition to the contest I wish you best of luck!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023

You made my day with your lovely review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Living in a free society is the only way we can really experience these feelings you record here and so many are shackled by regimes that prevent such a wonderful experience, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

We need to appreciate our freedom, thank you for your review.