A Symphonic Celebration
The language of flowers4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What a wonderful slant on the beauty of a rose: not only its physical beauty and fragrance beckons to us, but there's a subliminal aural allure, as well. Great originality. And a lovely photo to accompany it, too. Nicely done, Mystery Poet!
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What a wonderful slant on the beauty of a rose: not only its physical beauty and fragrance beckons to us, but there's a subliminal aural allure, as well. Great originality. And a lovely photo to accompany it, too. Nicely done, Mystery Poet!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
Comment from Cass Carlton
By my count you've one line less than your poem requires to be a naani, which has four lines.
An easy solution to this would be to divide the first line into two. Voila!! Now we have a naani poem which speaks of the bewitching effect of the
fragrance of roses.Your artwork shows Cecile Brunner roses, a miniature rose renowned for its sweeetness of perfume. I had one growing. Sheer heaven. cheers Cass
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By my count you've one line less than your poem requires to be a naani, which has four lines.
An easy solution to this would be to divide the first line into two. Voila!! Now we have a naani poem which speaks of the bewitching effect of the
fragrance of roses.Your artwork shows Cecile Brunner roses, a miniature rose renowned for its sweeetness of perfume. I had one growing. Sheer heaven. cheers Cass
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and personification.
-A good opening line about the allure of roses.
-They are beautiful and graceful.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and personification.
-A good opening line about the allure of roses.
-They are beautiful and graceful.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh my lord, this is so awesomely written I have to give you the big one!
There's nothing I would change about this poem, it is very well written with amazing work choices and find sentence structure.
Hope you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Oh my lord, this is so awesomely written I have to give you the big one!
There's nothing I would change about this poem, it is very well written with amazing work choices and find sentence structure.
Hope you have a great evening!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023
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Lea,
Thank you for the six star review. Receiving a great review is always valued and appreciated.
All the best,
Eugene
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You deserve it!