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Watching and Wishing

25 sylables

2 total reviews 
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I like the joyous rhythm of your poem, and I want to give it a try too:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest and your writings.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
    Thank you. I'm so glad you like my poem and took the time to tell me so.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Twenty-five syllables exactly! You did a fine job and should have a good chance at the win. I would've tried, myself, but I was greedy and already added two posts today. As I am in a wheelchair, I would jump (if I could) at the chance to fly!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2023
    Thank you so very much. I actually do love watching the birds and I'll admit that I almost envy them the freedom they seem to have.
reply by jim vecchio on 01-Aug-2023
    At my assisted living facility, God has given us so many wonderful birds to admire!