I Thought It Was Spring
A Kyrielle in iambic tetrameter15 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a neat Kyrielle from the birds point of view. Your poetry sings like the bird who was waiting for Spring but wasn't going to let the snowflkes ruin his day.
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This is a neat Kyrielle from the birds point of view. Your poetry sings like the bird who was waiting for Spring but wasn't going to let the snowflkes ruin his day.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think we are on the side of the birds here as we often feel the same way when Spring takes its time to birth, I enjoyed your fine repeated lines June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I think we are on the side of the birds here as we often feel the same way when Spring takes its time to birth, I enjoyed your fine repeated lines June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from pome lover
that is just too cute! His reputation is at stake - funny.
And bless his little "harbinger of spring heart," he's determined to stay, regardless of the weather.
A fun take on welcoming Spring.
Katharine
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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that is just too cute! His reputation is at stake - funny.
And bless his little "harbinger of spring heart," he's determined to stay, regardless of the weather.
A fun take on welcoming Spring.
Katharine
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from country ranch writer
It all depends in what part of the world you're living in as it changes so quickly at times. It's August here in Florida where it's to darn scorching hot outside.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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It all depends in what part of the world you're living in as it changes so quickly at times. It's August here in Florida where it's to darn scorching hot outside.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
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Comment from Bill Schott
This kyrielle, I Thought It was Spring, has the proper formatting and seems to speak to the odd summer weather which has included hailstorms and other unseasonable tropospheric occurrences.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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This kyrielle, I Thought It was Spring, has the proper formatting and seems to speak to the odd summer weather which has included hailstorms and other unseasonable tropospheric occurrences.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from karenina
This poem just plain makes me smile! I'm one who often doesn't know the time of day...so it's not a stretch for me to believe a bird might be fooled into thinking spring was ...what? Not here yet? On it's way? Clever refrain line! Kyrielle with Klass! (Oh my, I was trying to be clever)
Karenina
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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This poem just plain makes me smile! I'm one who often doesn't know the time of day...so it's not a stretch for me to believe a bird might be fooled into thinking spring was ...what? Not here yet? On it's way? Clever refrain line! Kyrielle with Klass! (Oh my, I was trying to be clever)
Karenina
Comment Written 02-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
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Blessings to you!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
It's sad when even the birds are complaining about the weather, LOL.
Loved your Kyrielle June, written from this little bird's POV but determined still to serenade.
Nicely done, enjoyed it.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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It's sad when even the birds are complaining about the weather, LOL.
Loved your Kyrielle June, written from this little bird's POV but determined still to serenade.
Nicely done, enjoyed it.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a well written Kyrielle. It's so artful that you are talking about snow here. To make us feel cool from the heat? Yes. Spring would be idea and winter would be Okay.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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This is a well written Kyrielle. It's so artful that you are talking about snow here. To make us feel cool from the heat? Yes. Spring would be idea and winter would be Okay.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a well-written Kyrielle this is. As always, you inspire me. This has attitude and I like it! Not fair the tricks that the weather will play on us and our moods.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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What a well-written Kyrielle this is. As always, you inspire me. This has attitude and I like it! Not fair the tricks that the weather will play on us and our moods.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from royowen
I like the Kyrielle, it's such an easy way if one is a serial rhymer such as me, but you you nail it together so beautifully my friend, this is a perfect Kyrielle, well done June, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I like the Kyrielle, it's such an easy way if one is a serial rhymer such as me, but you you nail it together so beautifully my friend, this is a perfect Kyrielle, well done June, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
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I?m happy you enjoyed this poem on the determination of the little Robin to sing, despite the late arrival of spring. Life can be full of unexpected surprises. But we forge ahead with song! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
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