Your Trunk Is Leaking
Life's never easy - even if you're well armed.2 total reviews
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent entry for the
Dialogue Only Writing Contest with best of wishes in the contest my friend;-) The storyline captivated my attention throughout the piece and I love the want the characters bounced off one another. The imagery is spot on for this well written and well thought out story!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you;-)
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Excellent entry for the
Dialogue Only Writing Contest with best of wishes in the contest my friend;-) The storyline captivated my attention throughout the piece and I love the want the characters bounced off one another. The imagery is spot on for this well written and well thought out story!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you;-)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2023
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Overall, this piece is a compelling glimpse into the world of mobsters, capturing the reader's attention from start to finish. Fans of crime thrillers will find themselves fully immersed in this engaging tale, eagerly awaiting what happens next as Johnny and Dante navigate through the dangerous and unpredictable landscape of their criminal lives.
Well done.
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Overall, this piece is a compelling glimpse into the world of mobsters, capturing the reader's attention from start to finish. Fans of crime thrillers will find themselves fully immersed in this engaging tale, eagerly awaiting what happens next as Johnny and Dante navigate through the dangerous and unpredictable landscape of their criminal lives.
Well done.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2023
