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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fun post full of alliteration in those repeated sounds here Michelle and it is a joy to read and the sentiments are warm and kind too, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2023
    This was actually based on my one tow kitties who are no longer with me. Thank you for this. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Even internal rhyme this time! Great mono-rhyme here, Michelle, at which you seem to be excelling. Fun and entertaining with a lovely story as well! Thanks for sharing Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you so much for your encouragement and the stars. It was fun to write.