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Tom Horonzy
Oh, oh. The competition is ramping up. I thought myself to be alone on top of the hill wearing the crown of inanity, but this submission of yours will hone my wit sharply or I'll lose my most comfortable place, as King of the HIll.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2023
I'm sure you are still King! Hahaha
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JT traveller
Fantastic nonsense poem. I love it. The intricacies of the brain are fascinating. The different lobes independent yet interacting, the sulci. Amazing stuff. Good poem.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
Thank you so much for the review and stars.
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