Red Skeletons
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Last Hurt"Haunting Poetry for the Darkness in us all
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Comment from FearlessSpringDay
Reading this reminded me of a moment where all I could see when I looked at a specific photograph was wishing those same exact thing. That I could see that person, that I could talk to them, that I could hug them. Beautifully done thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Reading this reminded me of a moment where all I could see when I looked at a specific photograph was wishing those same exact thing. That I could see that person, that I could talk to them, that I could hug them. Beautifully done thank you.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you so very much.
Comment from Peitho
This poem triggered a lot of emotion for me. Very well done! It is a beautiful piece. "Shattered heart scatted to the wind
My soul, you skinned" was my favorite part, it's creepy, in a good way!
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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This poem triggered a lot of emotion for me. Very well done! It is a beautiful piece. "Shattered heart scatted to the wind
My soul, you skinned" was my favorite part, it's creepy, in a good way!
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
I love this, and I think this is the way and language that a minute poem should be written, an excellent theme that graphs the cake and eats it with a savage intensity, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : (Scatted) to the wind, scattered?
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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I love this, and I think this is the way and language that a minute poem should be written, an excellent theme that graphs the cake and eats it with a savage intensity, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : (Scatted) to the wind, scattered?
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for pointing out the error.
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nice poem that you have written for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I hope that you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you and give you peace all week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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This is a nice poem that you have written for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I hope that you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you and give you peace all week. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you
Comment from jim vecchio
I remember when I said goodbye to my old college love. But God gave me a more wonderful woman for thirty-one years, and she still lives in my heart. When you can't fight tht fight any longer, you will find that you have the added strength you need.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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I remember when I said goodbye to my old college love. But God gave me a more wonderful woman for thirty-one years, and she still lives in my heart. When you can't fight tht fight any longer, you will find that you have the added strength you need.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Yes you do. Thank you.
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Enjoy many blessings!