Betty's First Day Of Kindergarte
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Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Looks like Betty is happy to start kindergarten or
is she just happy that because she is starting kindergarten her mom bought her two new dresses, a new vest, new pants, and new sandals?
She even gets to bring flowers in a vase to her first teacher.
My kindergarten days were gloomy...there was a nasty nun that got a kick out of squeezing my cheeks so hard I would start crying .. every damn day.
I would lean backward hoping she would let go instead she would
knead my poor cheeks in between her fingers.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Ciao!
Looks like Betty is happy to start kindergarten or
is she just happy that because she is starting kindergarten her mom bought her two new dresses, a new vest, new pants, and new sandals?
She even gets to bring flowers in a vase to her first teacher.
My kindergarten days were gloomy...there was a nasty nun that got a kick out of squeezing my cheeks so hard I would start crying .. every damn day.
I would lean backward hoping she would let go instead she would
knead my poor cheeks in between her fingers.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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Voting is over!
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The last n would not fit in the title
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet and very well written 100 Word story you have penned for the contest about Bettys first day of kindergarten. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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This is a very sweet and very well written 100 Word story you have penned for the contest about Bettys first day of kindergarten. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Paul Manton
This is a sweet story of a three (?) year old girl, who is an obvious joy.
I think every little girl likes the color pink, so it's not surprising that she has clothes that are of that hue.
The daisies and roses sound right too - and the picture enhances the story really well. The little bit of dialogue from Ned gives the story more interest, and Betty's big smile finishes off the narrative perfectly.
Thank you for this well-written flash 100.
Paul
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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This is a sweet story of a three (?) year old girl, who is an obvious joy.
I think every little girl likes the color pink, so it's not surprising that she has clothes that are of that hue.
The daisies and roses sound right too - and the picture enhances the story really well. The little bit of dialogue from Ned gives the story more interest, and Betty's big smile finishes off the narrative perfectly.
Thank you for this well-written flash 100.
Paul
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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You are welcome.
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Have a great day.
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That is not fair. I can't read you
r poems
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Don't know what's happened there.
Don't worry. Must be a glitch.
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No you told me you don't want me to read your poems
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That must be true then.
It will be because you have sent me too many messages.
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No I haven't.
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Pookie, I will let you back into my poems. I didn't mean to be unkind, but you were asking me too many questions too often. If you can back off I will treat you like everyone else.
You asked me where I live - London. You can read a detailed resume called 'The Magician'. Give me a few minutes to unmute you.
Paul
Comment from JT traveller
A beautiful story accompanied by a wonderful illustration. Works like this always bring a smile to my face. Well done on your writing and best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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A beautiful story accompanied by a wonderful illustration. Works like this always bring a smile to my face. Well done on your writing and best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thanks, will you read my meaningful life poem?