Heed Not
Kyrielle contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine write, well metered and rhymed and I enjoyed the dark sentiments. A skilful write and you won my vote with this one, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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A fine write, well metered and rhymed and I enjoyed the dark sentiments. A skilful write and you won my vote with this one, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and support, Dolly. I really appreciate the gracious stars and the stop in. Have yourself a wonderful day.
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Ron
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Gotta give this one a six poet and thanks for writing a kryelle the way it's supposed to be written.
Really love this and you've handled that tricky 3rd stanza admirably. I always struggle with that one when I write them.
Great repeating line, flawless meter and it flows perfectly.
Good luck in the contest! I think you'll do well.
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Gotta give this one a six poet and thanks for writing a kryelle the way it's supposed to be written.
Really love this and you've handled that tricky 3rd stanza admirably. I always struggle with that one when I write them.
Great repeating line, flawless meter and it flows perfectly.
Good luck in the contest! I think you'll do well.
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Katie. Yes, some folks just don't it. For me, meter and flow is everything. I love the kryelle form. I know what you mean by the third stanza. It gets tricky there. I dearly appreciate the kind review and generous rating. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great weekend and thank you again.
Comment from country ranch writer
Easy on the eye sight fir all men ti see.
A but off the the path abut talking about all things about farting, guess it takes all kinds to make the world but farting butterflies! Reall!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Easy on the eye sight fir all men ti see.
A but off the the path abut talking about all things about farting, guess it takes all kinds to make the world but farting butterflies! Reall!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Lol. I'm just goofing around. It seems like nothing stands a chance in these contests if all you have to do is mention a cat or kittens. So why not farting butterflies? I'm just poking some fun. Thank you for the review and stars for this ridiculous piece, Barb.
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It?s funny in a silly way guys will drool over this wishing they could do mite than tiuchhehe
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Haha. I'm sure they will.
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Hugs
Comment from JSD
You possibly mean 'shat' rather than 'start'?
This is a scatological, scurrilous piece of writing that has some success, although I think the bitter tone rather undercuts the possibilities that lie within. Good rhyme and rhythm, however, and effective use of the refrain.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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You possibly mean 'shat' rather than 'start'?
This is a scatological, scurrilous piece of writing that has some success, although I think the bitter tone rather undercuts the possibilities that lie within. Good rhyme and rhythm, however, and effective use of the refrain.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Lol. Yeah, this was a total waste of time but I had a dumb chuckle along the way. That's all that matters. Shart is when you s#!t and fart at the same time. I was just being disgusting there. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars for this ridiculous piece, John. I'm going for a new record, to see how many views I get before I actually get my second review. Lol. Have a good one, J.
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Well, you learn something every day!