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Comment from walk.write.reflect
This poem is such a delight to read. It reminds me of a tree I saw in the woods recently. The tree was tall and majestic, and I wondered what it was thinking about. When I read this poem, I imagined the tree's emotions and the other things you wrote about. It indeed painted a picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this humor.
Best wishes in the contest.
Best Regards.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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This poem is such a delight to read. It reminds me of a tree I saw in the woods recently. The tree was tall and majestic, and I wondered what it was thinking about. When I read this poem, I imagined the tree's emotions and the other things you wrote about. It indeed painted a picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this humor.
Best wishes in the contest.
Best Regards.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from Eleri
This is great idea for a poem and it reads well. However, as far I understand a Kyrielle, the repeated line has to be the same in each stanza whereas yours changes. For example, you could repeat the last line of stanza one but that would then have to appear in the other stanzas as well. I would check this out with Poetry Dances or the contest setter before the cut-off date to be sure.
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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This is great idea for a poem and it reads well. However, as far I understand a Kyrielle, the repeated line has to be the same in each stanza whereas yours changes. For example, you could repeat the last line of stanza one but that would then have to appear in the other stanzas as well. I would check this out with Poetry Dances or the contest setter before the cut-off date to be sure.
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you I wasn't clear about this. I will check it out.
