The Milk Maid and the Cow
A double verse limerick.23 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Lisa,
I laughed out loud at your stacked limerick.
It was sweet and humorous.
Your syllable count is perfect.
Good luck , Lisa.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Lisa,
I laughed out loud at your stacked limerick.
It was sweet and humorous.
Your syllable count is perfect.
Good luck , Lisa.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from royowen
I must admit this is one of the best "stacked limericks" I've seen, the theme is brilliant, although originally bawdy in nature, this was the next best thing, brilliantly dine jennty, good luck, blessings Roy.
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I must admit this is one of the best "stacked limericks" I've seen, the theme is brilliant, although originally bawdy in nature, this was the next best thing, brilliantly dine jennty, good luck, blessings Roy.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I always like your Limerick and this one is no exception. I like the humor. It's hard for me to write one and I wrote a few in the past.
Did you get the artwork first and then wrote the poem or vice versa?
Well done.
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I always like your Limerick and this one is no exception. I like the humor. It's hard for me to write one and I wrote a few in the past.
Did you get the artwork first and then wrote the poem or vice versa?
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Debbie Pope
I knew that you would just have to enter this contest, Lisa May. I also know that surely you will win. Limericks flow from your pen like curse words from the cow. You know how to weave a story, rhyme, and be a little bit naughty.
Good job, you naughty girl.
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I knew that you would just have to enter this contest, Lisa May. I also know that surely you will win. Limericks flow from your pen like curse words from the cow. You know how to weave a story, rhyme, and be a little bit naughty.
Good job, you naughty girl.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Lisasview
Now this one made me laugh... I have read several today and by far this is the very best of the lot LisaMay...
Still laughing...and, the image is perfect!!!
Lisasview
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Now this one made me laugh... I have read several today and by far this is the very best of the lot LisaMay...
Still laughing...and, the image is perfect!!!
Lisasview
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh Moo! I am not sure what this brand of humour is call, or even if it has a fancy Greek or Latin name. It ought to. It develops an expectation in the minds of the audience or readers and then cleverly avoids what we all thought was inevitable. I did it once with a song about a lobster.
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Oh Moo! I am not sure what this brand of humour is call, or even if it has a fancy Greek or Latin name. It ought to. It develops an expectation in the minds of the audience or readers and then cleverly avoids what we all thought was inevitable. I did it once with a song about a lobster.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Wils
Very clever, that's exactly where my mind went. You showed a lot of restraint on that one. A six in my book and should do very well in the contest.
Geoff
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Very clever, that's exactly where my mind went. You showed a lot of restraint on that one. A six in my book and should do very well in the contest.
Geoff
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Mary Vigasin
The first thing that came to mind was the swear word, but you brilliantly, and I might add, hilariously cleansed my mind of such a thought.
I am not a poet by any means, but I would "But it was an angry cow that used the word other than bucket."
"and it cursed " seems to stop the momentum.
Regardless this was funny and I enjoyed reading.
Best wishes,
Mary
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The first thing that came to mind was the swear word, but you brilliantly, and I might add, hilariously cleansed my mind of such a thought.
I am not a poet by any means, but I would "But it was an angry cow that used the word other than bucket."
"and it cursed " seems to stop the momentum.
Regardless this was funny and I enjoyed reading.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from patcelaw
Just because it is a limerick doesn't mean you have to use bad words, and you have proved that very much with your writing. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
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Just because it is a limerick doesn't mean you have to use bad words, and you have proved that very much with your writing. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is great fun! You've composed a skilfully stacked limerick consisting of two parts: i) the milk maid's composure and refusal to be dragged into an expletive for the sake of the verse; ii) the cow's much more uncouth reaction to her manners. When I look back at the image, you've portrayed both characters spot-on and made me smile! Well done and good luck! Debbie
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This is great fun! You've composed a skilfully stacked limerick consisting of two parts: i) the milk maid's composure and refusal to be dragged into an expletive for the sake of the verse; ii) the cow's much more uncouth reaction to her manners. When I look back at the image, you've portrayed both characters spot-on and made me smile! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
