Comment from zanya

Exceptional

This is such an appropriate title for this soothing, inspiring poem reminding us of the delights of the 'summer night' and a delightful pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you so very much. I'm so glad that you liked my star gazing thoughts.

Comment from ruminative scribbler

Excellent

The poem follows the 2-5-2 syllable structure. The word at the end of each line rhymes too which is nice. I like the imagery and then the accompanying picture compliments well and, along with the background color you have chosen for the text and border for the pic, it is very aesthetically pleasing. I wish you well. in the contest

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Bravo poet!
You gotten all three lines to rhyme. The poem flows perfectly and doesn't sound forced into the constraints of the syllable count.
Best wishes. Best one I've read so far!
Luv & stuff,
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

A wonderful short poem, I am impressed with your rhyme, as it really gives a serene image to the reader, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you