Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

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Karen

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 23-Aug-2023

your welcome.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You say so much with so few words/syllables. Excellent choice of artwork to complement your verse and add to the theme. It makes me want to go look for fireflies.
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

I read an article not to long ago that fireflies are endangered. Not nearly as many as when I was young. Hope you find some. Thanks for the read and feedback.

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Aww. Sweet. And a lovely picture too. You say a great deal in these few syllables. I wish you all the very best of luck with the competition.

John

"Poetry is the space between words."

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thanks for the read and the feedback. Appreciated.