Butterflies from heaven
Butterflies are spiritual creatures13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think these butterflies are truly Heaven sent, they are a joy and magical to watch and glimpsing them in the park adds a touch of colour, I enjoyed your fine words, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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I think these butterflies are truly Heaven sent, they are a joy and magical to watch and glimpsing them in the park adds a touch of colour, I enjoyed your fine words, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Dolly appreciate the awesome review ❤️
Comment from jaded831
I always felt butterflies are spirits coming from heaven. It probably isn't true, but it is a nice thought. Your poem felt most relatable, and I love butterflies, so your poem was first on the list.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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I always felt butterflies are spirits coming from heaven. It probably isn't true, but it is a nice thought. Your poem felt most relatable, and I love butterflies, so your poem was first on the list.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thank you I believe they are spirits from heaven or we could say messengers letting us know loved ones are okay. It?s a beautiful thought.
Comment from Writebynight
This is beautiful! On quiet days you can sit and watch them flutter about for hours. Strange to think they are so blissfully unaware of their own beauty. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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This is beautiful! On quiet days you can sit and watch them flutter about for hours. Strange to think they are so blissfully unaware of their own beauty. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for The World's Shortest Haiku writing promptContest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Excellent entry for The World's Shortest Haiku writing promptContest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2023
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Thanks so much
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and well written short haiku you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery that goes so well with the words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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This is a very lovely and well written short haiku you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery that goes so well with the words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Teri 🙂
Comment from jessizero
I have never understood why butterflies are believed to be sent from heaven, but I must admit your poem is lovely. You met all of the requirements, and the picture you added was nice. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I have never understood why butterflies are believed to be sent from heaven, but I must admit your poem is lovely. You met all of the requirements, and the picture you added was nice. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
I would give a six to this if I had one, so please accept my virtual one and also your first vote. My mother loved butterflies and so collected everything with butterflies on it. We even released butterflies into the skies at her funeral, when she died very young. The next week after, my friends talked me into golfing nine holes with them. A butterfly showed up at the very first hole, and followed me, plus danced around my head the whole 9 holes. It had to have taken us two hours but that butterfly never left me. Never went near the others, but just me. So we came to the conclusion that was God's way of saying she never really left me.
So this was a very lovely read to me, and I thank you so very much for this and I hope you win, my dear friend.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I would give a six to this if I had one, so please accept my virtual one and also your first vote. My mother loved butterflies and so collected everything with butterflies on it. We even released butterflies into the skies at her funeral, when she died very young. The next week after, my friends talked me into golfing nine holes with them. A butterfly showed up at the very first hole, and followed me, plus danced around my head the whole 9 holes. It had to have taken us two hours but that butterfly never left me. Never went near the others, but just me. So we came to the conclusion that was God's way of saying she never really left me.
So this was a very lovely read to me, and I thank you so very much for this and I hope you win, my dear friend.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much my friend I love butterflies also and have lots of spiritual encounters with them your encounter was so sweet also she?s always with you 🙂
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
This is so stunning poet! It looks to me like you've put the satori first which is very common in shorter haiku. I hope I'm not mistaken but trust me. You did it right.
It would be helpful for readers if you put a little dash - or a ~ after the word butterflies, indicating a pause...
butterflies~
angelic spirits
heaven sent
make spirits plural since you have butterflies plural.
This is amazing. I don't know if you are going to take my suggestion but it doesn't matter. This is a stellar poem and best wishes in the contest!
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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This is so stunning poet! It looks to me like you've put the satori first which is very common in shorter haiku. I hope I'm not mistaken but trust me. You did it right.
It would be helpful for readers if you put a little dash - or a ~ after the word butterflies, indicating a pause...
butterflies~
angelic spirits
heaven sent
make spirits plural since you have butterflies plural.
This is amazing. I don't know if you are going to take my suggestion but it doesn't matter. This is a stellar poem and best wishes in the contest!
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done a wonderful job with the writing prompt. Your poem is creative and nicely executed. I love the photograph of the butterfly. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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You have done a wonderful job with the writing prompt. Your poem is creative and nicely executed. I love the photograph of the butterfly. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from royowen
I like this one, haiku can be as little as two lines, so this is no great surprise, as long as the 'aha's in place, beautifully written dear friend, but great post, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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I like this one, haiku can be as little as two lines, so this is no great surprise, as long as the 'aha's in place, beautifully written dear friend, but great post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Roy 🙂
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Most welcome
