Autumn Stroll
Sounds of Fall 1-5-1 short haiku29 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for The World's Shortest Haiku writing promptContest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Excellent entry for The World's Shortest Haiku writing promptContest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 27-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Gypsy!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written short haiku you have penned about leaves in fall and the color of the footpath it leaves and the sound of the crunch. Great imagery from the art work you chose and very good words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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This is a very well written short haiku you have penned about leaves in fall and the color of the footpath it leaves and the sound of the crunch. Great imagery from the art work you chose and very good words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
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You are so welcome! love and blessings, teri
Comment from Sally Law
My, this is lovely in super short haiku. Seven syllables paint the autumnal scene perfectly.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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My, this is lovely in super short haiku. Seven syllables paint the autumnal scene perfectly.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, my friend! Xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those crunching leaves under foot are a reminder that when the Autumn leaves have fallen, winter will soon arrive, I enjoyed your Autumnal colours here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Those crunching leaves under foot are a reminder that when the Autumn leaves have fallen, winter will soon arrive, I enjoyed your Autumnal colours here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly! Xo
Comment from Ben Colder
One of my favorite times of the year. The photo in lovely and rewarding. Brings memories of the good old days when a boy. I see nothing wrong with this write. Best to you.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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One of my favorite times of the year. The photo in lovely and rewarding. Brings memories of the good old days when a boy. I see nothing wrong with this write. Best to you.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from RainbewLatte
Short. Simple. Sweet. Good fun. Amazing way to end the poem with crunch. It was almost as if I could feel it. The crunching.
And amazing description you were able to reach in such short length, I could in fact picture leaves "coloring" (well chosen word) the footpath.
And indeed. They crunch.
Good luck with the contest!
And thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Short. Simple. Sweet. Good fun. Amazing way to end the poem with crunch. It was almost as if I could feel it. The crunching.
And amazing description you were able to reach in such short length, I could in fact picture leaves "coloring" (well chosen word) the footpath.
And indeed. They crunch.
Good luck with the contest!
And thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from CD Richards
Seven syllables is certainly pretty short, but yours still conveys the complete message. I'm not sure it will be the world's shortest haiku, nor how much the length affects the decision, as long as it's less than 17 syllables.
I like this one. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Seven syllables is certainly pretty short, but yours still conveys the complete message. I'm not sure it will be the world's shortest haiku, nor how much the length affects the decision, as long as it's less than 17 syllables.
I like this one. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from ruminative scribbler
A really skilul and succinct haiku, which uses only 7 syllables altogether.
The 'cutting word' is also. an onomatopoeia which is delightful!
i wish you well in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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A really skilul and succinct haiku, which uses only 7 syllables altogether.
The 'cutting word' is also. an onomatopoeia which is delightful!
i wish you well in the contest
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so difficult to convey an evocative scene with so few syllables but, accompanied by that lovely image, you've created a very vividly portrayed autumn stroll with visual and aural detail. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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This is so difficult to convey an evocative scene with so few syllables but, accompanied by that lovely image, you've created a very vividly portrayed autumn stroll with visual and aural detail. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Boogienights
This is great! I wanted to right one of these, but I have trouble with short poems. You however, have inspired me to try. Best of luck in the contest. :)
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This is great! I wanted to right one of these, but I have trouble with short poems. You however, have inspired me to try. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
