Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

This is so totally great! I took me all but a microsecond to figure out this is a play on the saying "The apple doesn't fall to far from the tree". I hope I didn't get that wrong. That would be embarrassing.
This is a really, really good entry for this prompt! 2-3-2 is quite admirable and should do well in the contest.
Love it!
Katiemaedead

Oops, by the way, the satori you have can be put first. In a shorter haiku they often are

For example...

siblings ~
the apples fall
from the tree

I mentioned that option in the prompt.
Take care,
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you so very much, I will try out your suggestion and see, again many thanks

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a cute little haiku. I liked your take on fallen apples as siblings. I also liked the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a cute little haiku. I liked your take on fallen apples as siblings. I also liked the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Nicely done! You've managed this haiku in far less syllables than the 17 but I think you've cleverly got a sense of the tree being a metaphor for the parent and the apple the child which is lovely. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I truly enjoyed reading your work! The entire presentation supports your words. Excellent haiku, The red and green colors are perfect .Best wishes! Alexandra

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Thems look like mighty fine applies hanging from that tree :-)
A good entry for the - worlds shortest haiku - contest. Five words is all is takes to describe a nature scene ripe for the picking. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you very much

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Cute poem**************************
Made me smile a lot*******************
Grinning****************************
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Karen

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thank you very much

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 23-Aug-2023

you are quite welcome. Keep up the good work.
Karen