Comment from royowen

Excellent

Hooray Roxy, I loved this story, as all stories should be, whether long or short, in rhyme and in prose, they should always have a happy ending, and this is a very good outcome for this little dragon, great post My friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

Thanks so much Roy

reply by royowen on 30-Aug-2023

Most welcome

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

What an adorable story. It would make a great children's book, teaching them about various talents and bravery. Flash had a lot of courage and saved the day! Too bad you missed the contest. I think this would have done well.
One nit--I think you meant other(s):
"I must tell the other about what was said.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

I fixed my boo boo, Thanks so much

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a really fun verse with its fine message of Flash being a hero after all and saving the day. It would be an absolute delight for children and very enjoyable here in Wales, UK where the dragon is a national symbol! One small edit - Flash kept very (quiet)... Love the names of the two foes, Big Al and Big Fred. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

Thanks so much Debbie

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

I'm sorry you missed the contest, as this adorable story would have had a very good chance of winning. Of course, if it was the Kids' Motivational Poem contest that I won, I'm very relieved you didn't enter!

Your story made me smile. I love that you showed that not having one skill doesn't mean you don't have others. This is fun and uplifting, and your rhymes work nicely.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

Congrats on winning! =} Thanks so much

reply by Michele Harber on 30-Aug-2023

Thank you, Roxanna. I appreciate that.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is such a cute poem about Flash the Dragon. You used very good descriptive words and an adorable picture of Flash. I am so glad he turnout to be a hero. Thank you for sharing. Sorry you missed the contest. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

Thank you Teri

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a fun post Roxanna and I enjoyed your fine words that children would love, it is a pity you missed the contest, but at least the readers have a chance to enjoy it now, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023

Thank you Dolly