Leadership's Cloak of Secrecy
21-syllable naani10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Leadership's Cloak of Secrecy, has the proper formatting and notes that leaders lead from the front, not under cover of darkness or behind closed doors.
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This naani, Leadership's Cloak of Secrecy, has the proper formatting and notes that leaders lead from the front, not under cover of darkness or behind closed doors.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet,
you now have 9 votes.
Yes, Biden's time is up.
He and his son have been filling their pockets making million dollar deals with Ukraine oligarchs at least since 2014 offering them their hidden support for money. Biden then was vice president under Obama( who was aware of their dirty deals)
The CIA had found a laptop with proof of their corruption but kept it a secret during the 2020 election to favour Biden.
Trump at the time asked President Zelensky to expose Hunter but he said NO because he was involved too.
Had he said yes , Trump would have won the elections and there would have been NO war.
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Ciao poet,
you now have 9 votes.
Yes, Biden's time is up.
He and his son have been filling their pockets making million dollar deals with Ukraine oligarchs at least since 2014 offering them their hidden support for money. Biden then was vice president under Obama( who was aware of their dirty deals)
The CIA had found a laptop with proof of their corruption but kept it a secret during the 2020 election to favour Biden.
Trump at the time asked President Zelensky to expose Hunter but he said NO because he was involved too.
Had he said yes , Trump would have won the elections and there would have been NO war.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
Comment from Wendy G
That is a fine Naani, and it expresses a truth which is universal and throughout time. It is well written with a consistent metaphor, and the image is a well chosen accompaniment. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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That is a fine Naani, and it expresses a truth which is universal and throughout time. It is well written with a consistent metaphor, and the image is a well chosen accompaniment. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
Comment from JSD
A clever and thought-provoking poem. Excellent creation of metaphor needs rewarding. Gets my vote. Well done and good luck in the competition.
John
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A clever and thought-provoking poem. Excellent creation of metaphor needs rewarding. Gets my vote. Well done and good luck in the competition.
John
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Interesting entry for the Naani writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"We are not meant to be perfect. We are meant to be whole." - Oprah Winfrey.
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Interesting entry for the Naani writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"We are not meant to be perfect. We are meant to be whole." - Oprah Winfrey.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely worded and rhymed in your naani poem. Hoping that the truth will be revealed so much is covered up in secrecy and we don't really know who is really pulling the strings!
Best wishes in the contest!
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Nicely worded and rhymed in your naani poem. Hoping that the truth will be revealed so much is covered up in secrecy and we don't really know who is really pulling the strings!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Clever words for the contest here and I enjoyed the innuendo in your subtle words, good luck with the contest, those unravelling threads have been seen before as lies are told in high places, love Dolly x x x x
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Clever words for the contest here and I enjoyed the innuendo in your subtle words, good luck with the contest, those unravelling threads have been seen before as lies are told in high places, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from ruminative scribbler
The mantle of power's might
is stitched with fraying threads
that will unravel
in Truth's light
I have unfortunately run out of sixes.
This Naani poem cleverly and poignantly describes this philosophical comment and I am really enjoying the metaphor!
I wish you all the best in the contest.
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The mantle of power's might
is stitched with fraying threads
that will unravel
in Truth's light
I have unfortunately run out of sixes.
This Naani poem cleverly and poignantly describes this philosophical comment and I am really enjoying the metaphor!
I wish you all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent! I love the flowing sentiments here of power's fraying might! Your threads unraveling in Truth's light is particularly vivid imagery. And of course, one doesn't need to guess the wearer of this mantel although it could apply to many! Impressive post! Well done and good luck (strong contender) Debbie
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Excellent! I love the flowing sentiments here of power's fraying might! Your threads unraveling in Truth's light is particularly vivid imagery. And of course, one doesn't need to guess the wearer of this mantel although it could apply to many! Impressive post! Well done and good luck (strong contender) Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
You said is brother/sister. You laid down the truth in just a few short pertinent lines. I mean, we can't even get a president under 70.
My my my.
D
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You said is brother/sister. You laid down the truth in just a few short pertinent lines. I mean, we can't even get a president under 70.
My my my.
D
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
