2023 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Your Love"-
17 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I like how colorfully you presented this love poem in tanka form.
Naturally you chose a shade of blue because it's in your name! And blue is symbolic of the divine and heaven.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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I like how colorfully you presented this love poem in tanka form.
Naturally you chose a shade of blue because it's in your name! And blue is symbolic of the divine and heaven.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Boogienights
How lovely. A wonderful expression of love in this well written short poem. I've tried this form of poetry in the past, unsuccessfully. Thanks for sharing yours.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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How lovely. A wonderful expression of love in this well written short poem. I've tried this form of poetry in the past, unsuccessfully. Thanks for sharing yours.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
cool blue tanka... soothing and relaxing...
nice imagery and smooth flow
cool pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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cool blue tanka... soothing and relaxing...
nice imagery and smooth flow
cool pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wouldn't it be wonderful if love flowed as easily and beautifully as your poetic package. The poem, the artwork, and the colors used make this a perfect package. Thank you.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if love flowed as easily and beautifully as your poetic package. The poem, the artwork, and the colors used make this a perfect package. Thank you.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Gypsy, thank you so much for your notes and what they teach us about Japanese poetry forms. They lead us to appreciate even more poems like this one, presented with beautiful imagery and feeling.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Gypsy, thank you so much for your notes and what they teach us about Japanese poetry forms. They lead us to appreciate even more poems like this one, presented with beautiful imagery and feeling.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
what can I say about your stunning presentation that has not already been articulated? Words reflect an image that is mirrored through the art of desire. How can one not be dragged into the vortex of its beauty?
Even though you only ever refer once to the colour blue, it is all I see, or feel while reading it... you magnify its appearance so artful and cleverly within your applications.
I feel the emotion in reading these words in a deeper sense... but then again, I love romance and everything it stands for. I guess it's an escape mechanism to allow the mind to be somewhere so pleasant, it can't help but be in a happy place. Aaahhhhhhhh!
Truly exceptional!
With our thoughts we create...
a meeting of ourselves.
Warm regards,
James.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
what can I say about your stunning presentation that has not already been articulated? Words reflect an image that is mirrored through the art of desire. How can one not be dragged into the vortex of its beauty?
Even though you only ever refer once to the colour blue, it is all I see, or feel while reading it... you magnify its appearance so artful and cleverly within your applications.
I feel the emotion in reading these words in a deeper sense... but then again, I love romance and everything it stands for. I guess it's an escape mechanism to allow the mind to be somewhere so pleasant, it can't help but be in a happy place. Aaahhhhhhhh!
Truly exceptional!
With our thoughts we create...
a meeting of ourselves.
Warm regards,
James.
******
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you, James, it's so good to hear from you. You know blue is my favorite color. I was looking through my pinterest page and found the picture and the poem flowed out of my easily.
May you have a wonderful day, my friend.
Abracitos y besitos,
Marival
"I have to face life with passion. I must rediscover the irresistible will to live and to love." - anonymous
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The colour blue is associated with sky and sea and open spaces, intuition, imagination and freedom. It has a depth of meaning in trust and sincerity, faith and inspiration, so losing yourself inside this colour is understandable here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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The colour blue is associated with sky and sea and open spaces, intuition, imagination and freedom. It has a depth of meaning in trust and sincerity, faith and inspiration, so losing yourself inside this colour is understandable here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you, dolly.
Gypsy
Comment from karenina
Sigh. If only love flowed as smoothly and presented so consistently beautifully as your tanka! At this point in my life that idea seems far-fetched...
Love this, though!
Cerulean...nice!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Sigh. If only love flowed as smoothly and presented so consistently beautifully as your tanka! At this point in my life that idea seems far-fetched...
Love this, though!
Cerulean...nice!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Karenina. I like to think we are not too old for romance. (*÷*)
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love
Marival
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Not to old for romance...perhaps to wise to believe in "happily ever afters!"
(I'll just speak for myself)
:)
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you are right but a girl can dream
Comment from aryr
This tanka is awesome, Gypsy. I really loved your words because they made sense to me. They showed the beauty of the blue words. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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This tanka is awesome, Gypsy. I really loved your words because they made sense to me. They showed the beauty of the blue words. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from June Sargent
I do love the symbolism of the blue lotus highlighted in this tanka. Purity rising out of the muddy waters to open her heart to the sun. From the mundane to the heavenly. A cerulean beauty inside and out.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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I do love the symbolism of the blue lotus highlighted in this tanka. Purity rising out of the muddy waters to open her heart to the sun. From the mundane to the heavenly. A cerulean beauty inside and out.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
