Digital Prisoners
Daily digital dependents of smartphones2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a difficult exercise but you seem to have accomplished it well with some amazing words which skilfully combine together to reflect a strong image of those digital prisoners. Your last line is superb! Well done and good luck! Debbie
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This is a difficult exercise but you seem to have accomplished it well with some amazing words which skilfully combine together to reflect a strong image of those digital prisoners. Your last line is superb! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
Comment from jessizero
I noticed you used "in" and "of," but I suppose there is some kind of special rule for those words? I am impressed by your alliteration poem, though. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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I noticed you used "in" and "of," but I suppose there is some kind of special rule for those words? I am impressed by your alliteration poem, though. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023
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Jessie,
Thank you for your review. Your comment is noted reference the use of "in" and "of" and corrections have been made to match the rules of the contest.
All the best,
Eugene