Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Well done! A fine and classy alliterative verse about poets. I thought it flowed well and you seemed to have a wealth of good and appropriate words at your disposal. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023

Thanks, Debbie.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

You have executed the difficult task of consecutive alliteration, while maintaining a cohesive thought sequence, with great skill. I like that the topic you've chosen to write a poem about is about poetry itself.

Correction:
It should be 'pentameter' not 'pantameter'.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thanks for reviewing and for pointing out my typo. Now corrected.

Comment from Sarah Tummey

Excellent

Well done for this. I'm so impressed you used words like pentameter!

I've been looking through the entries for the contest, and some have mistakenly done every line starting with the same letter, instead of every word. You kept to the rules though and it's really good.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thanks for reviewing and for your encouraging comments.