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Short Postings About Astatula's Favorite Son

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Why did he fall asleep? That would be a good discussion. Did he have narcolepsy? Was he bored & unchallenged or lost like I was. Maybe a tutor was called for. The ID theft is a good topic. but he got unnoticed as far as bumping his head from falling asleep.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
    Appreciate your comments and the review.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 20-Sep-2023
    my pleasure
Comment from BethShelby
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Sheriff Daniels is doing his best to raise this poem right. It seems to spend a lot of time discussing things do with crime as well but he expects Cody do the tasks he been assigned. You managed to get some information into the story about phishing and idenity thieves and AI as well.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
    Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Brett,
It was nice to see that the sheriff is requiring some chores from Cody. It used to be that way when I was growing up, but doesn't seem to be the practice so much anymore, unfortunately. I was interested in the identity theft issue. Years ago I found out that if you get a credit freeze from the three credit reporting agencies, no one can open an account in your name. I did it and have never had a problem. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
    Never hurts a boy to do simple chores like clean up his room. Too many people seem to have gotten away from those types of child rearing practices. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, sir, I think the reason I enjoy these chapters so much is because they sort of remind me of someone I used to know. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
    Always appreciate you.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I haven't heard the word carbuncle in a very long time. Poor Cody, life isn't fair if you have to do chores. Even if it is to pick up after yourself. I'm not familiar with Beth so I'm assuming it's the housekeeper. This was a fun read. Gretchen

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    Beth is rhe sheriff's fiance and the one who brought Cody to Astatula. Never hurt a boy to keep his room tidy. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Well written Brett. So the Cody stories are based on your own life? The Sheriff may seem strict but he is wise and will bring out the best in his young ward. Your story cahows insight into what boys of that age are like. Enjoyable read.
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    No, Cody is not based, at least not intentionally, on my own life. Many have asked me the question, but I did not create him in that regard. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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I do enjoy your Cody stories. I hope the Sheriff's expectations help Cody to learn to keep his space neat. It helps a lot in life, although I have to admit I've had less than stellar success with my seven kids. Maybe I can blame it on their mates.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    Appreciate the review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Nicely done, no superhero but just an imaginary friend that can help with the education of a young kid that has lots of imagination. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    Appreciate the review.
Comment from Sankey
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I always enjoy your writings. Especially about this imaginary boy that I feel like, in some respects might be more like someone we know in real life. Or someone we would have liked to have been. One spag."I know victims of identity th[i]ef(t)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
    Appreciate your insights, comments, and the review.
Comment from JSD
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An interesting tale. The characters are engaging and the message you seem to be conveying is effectively dealt with. A few spelling mistakes but overall a successful piece.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    Appreciate the review.