The Saga of Procrastination
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is hilarious, Iza! I love it! I didn't realise it was a rant though until the end but I can see it now. Your ending is superb and I don't blame you at all for this harmonious connection with yourself (even if it is only fiction!). This is going to be a hard one to beat! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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This is hilarious, Iza! I love it! I didn't realise it was a rant though until the end but I can see it now. Your ending is superb and I don't blame you at all for this harmonious connection with yourself (even if it is only fiction!). This is going to be a hard one to beat! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Debbie.
Comment from Lisasview
Great rant and I loved it... There are a couple of small grammar errors..I don't know if you want me to let you know what they are or if that would offend you?
This will be a wonderful contest entry and I do wish you the best of luck.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Great rant and I loved it... There are a couple of small grammar errors..I don't know if you want me to let you know what they are or if that would offend you?
This will be a wonderful contest entry and I do wish you the best of luck.
Lisasview
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Hi Lisa, please do tell me what they are:) English is my gibberish language, so I am still struggling with expressing myself accurately.
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I am more than happy to help you.
Just send your Magic Dating to my email
And I will respond.
yellowblisshouse@gmail.com
Lisa
Comment from Wayne Fowler
There!
Well said.
Wrong site, it sounds to me.
And speaking of wrong site. My sister suggested a dating site to me over the phone. I got confused, and joined the wrong site (free). I found Debbie, who was on that site for only one month, giving it a try. We've been married nearly 14 years. Our secret... I fell in love with her brains first, the rest of her second.
Good luck, and with the contest, too.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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There!
Well said.
Wrong site, it sounds to me.
And speaking of wrong site. My sister suggested a dating site to me over the phone. I got confused, and joined the wrong site (free). I found Debbie, who was on that site for only one month, giving it a try. We've been married nearly 14 years. Our secret... I fell in love with her brains first, the rest of her second.
Good luck, and with the contest, too.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023
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Funny to say that, because that is how I met my ex and move to Canada...
Comment from Terry Broxson
Lol, so you spent (I know it is fiction) all that money, time, and emotional energy, only to find that your perfect match is you. Now that is funny and very creative writing. Good work. Terry.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Lol, so you spent (I know it is fiction) all that money, time, and emotional energy, only to find that your perfect match is you. Now that is funny and very creative writing. Good work. Terry.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much Terry
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Yes, it's usually hard for a dating site to find the right one for you. Everyone tries to present their best side. Ilike your conclusion. Accept your financial losses, accept yourself and be happy as you are. Maybe then the right one will appear, in real life.
Best wishes for your rant in the contest.
Wendy
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Lol. Yes, it's usually hard for a dating site to find the right one for you. Everyone tries to present their best side. Ilike your conclusion. Accept your financial losses, accept yourself and be happy as you are. Maybe then the right one will appear, in real life.
Best wishes for your rant in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here, I've tried the dating sites and it was a disaster! I met lots of suitors but none of them fitted the bill and they all seemed so self absorbed! I think you are right here, my perfect match is myself! A fine write Iza and I love your sense of humour here, love Dolly x
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You made me smile here, I've tried the dating sites and it was a disaster! I met lots of suitors but none of them fitted the bill and they all seemed so self absorbed! I think you are right here, my perfect match is myself! A fine write Iza and I love your sense of humour here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
Comment from Thesis
I like this post. You figured it out. These sites are a joke. There are too many people who need crutches to succeed. Who needs extra baggage. You skillfully show that this is the path to drama. Who needs it? Be happy in your own skin. If a relationship is meant to be, it will happen, but ditch the losers.
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I like this post. You figured it out. These sites are a joke. There are too many people who need crutches to succeed. Who needs extra baggage. You skillfully show that this is the path to drama. Who needs it? Be happy in your own skin. If a relationship is meant to be, it will happen, but ditch the losers.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellently written rant. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, that draws in a reader. Those sites are worthless. When u was single I looked at them but it's sad. Best wishes finding who is waiting for you!
Alexandra
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This is an excellently written rant. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, that draws in a reader. Those sites are worthless. When u was single I looked at them but it's sad. Best wishes finding who is waiting for you!
Alexandra
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this rant contest entry. I cand definitely see a problem here. LOL I'm just glad I'm married and don't have to go through this stuff. LOL Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this rant contest entry. I cand definitely see a problem here. LOL I'm just glad I'm married and don't have to go through this stuff. LOL Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
Comment from estory
I really liked your ending here. It gets a chuckle out of me. And it is illustrative of how focused on ourselves we have become. Dating sites are scams. I used one once and the next thing I knew this person I exchanged messages with told me her mother was dying in The Central African Republic and needed me to send her $5,000 for medicine. Stick to meeting people in real life. That's hard enough nowadays. But I liked how you went full circle in your search back to yourself. estory
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I really liked your ending here. It gets a chuckle out of me. And it is illustrative of how focused on ourselves we have become. Dating sites are scams. I used one once and the next thing I knew this person I exchanged messages with told me her mother was dying in The Central African Republic and needed me to send her $5,000 for medicine. Stick to meeting people in real life. That's hard enough nowadays. But I liked how you went full circle in your search back to yourself. estory
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023