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Trump

Trump in a Pleiades form

6 total reviews 
Comment from L. Kalere
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Hey, you forgot a few: two-faced, toxic, treacherous, tyrannical, tetchy, temperamental, thug, tawdry. Thank you for telling it like it is. And these are only the T words.
Linda

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
    cool I have an idea an ABC poem about Trump!!!!
reply by L. Kalere on 25-Oct-2023
    Go For It...
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
    yes I will do something about Trump perhaps an ABC poem
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Amen! You are talking to the choir. The poem is clever. The picture was complimentary. I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    thanks I will look at your stuff soon
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 17-Sep-2023
    U R Welcome
Comment from BenThrone
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Amen to that!!!! You are very brave to post a poem like this on FanStory period, and especially as a contest entry, where it seems the audience skews even more conservative than on the site in general. Good luck!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
    thanks
Comment from DragonSkulls
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Please read the rules of the contest. The title is only supposed to be a "single" word. Seeing as how you have a two word title, the contest will be held up from going to booth until you simply fix this or get disqualified for not adhering to the rules. That may take days. A simple fix would be just deleting 'Pleiades' from your title in a reedit rather than holding the contest up from going to booth.

It's a great little piece though, if many overlook the treasonous crimes and the untruthful ramblings that spew from Biden's mouth.

Best of luck in the contest, author. Please change your title to just a single word so it meets the contest requirements and I'll up the rating.

DS

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    cool I will edit it now
Comment from RodG
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Trump is everything you all him here.
There were lousy presidents before him, but he was flat-out
Terrible.
The man needs to shut up and be put in jail.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    I agree
Comment from Paul Manton
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Yes indeed, Trump is a terrific twaddle tweeter!
A good use of your seven stars (sorry, that's not your score!) to denounce a really exceptionally dreadful politician.
Some of the 'official' tweets I have saved are so extraordinary that you wonder if this is a human being at all! Not on the planet!

Good luck in the competition.
Paul

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
    that's for sure. A few years ago a poet wrote a found poetry book based on the Donald's Tweets. Quite fun to read.
reply by Paul Manton on 17-Sep-2023
    I have an interesting collection - and a satirical book containing some of them. I was told by a knowledgeable friend that I had a libel suit on every page. Success!