Sweet Wine
Drinking her enchanting sweetness.2 total reviews
Comment from JSD
Bit saucy in tone but only slightly embarrassing. The imagery you use is effective, especially at the end with the chasing of 'Lonely'. Goos luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Bit saucy in tone but only slightly embarrassing. The imagery you use is effective, especially at the end with the chasing of 'Lonely'. Goos luck in the competition.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the read and feedback. Wonder how well some readers would take the sauce.
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Should have been 'good'. Sorry.
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Ok, no problem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sensual write full of passion and sweet love and I enjoyed your journey through this lovers encounter, a fine 10 liner for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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This is a sensual write full of passion and sweet love and I enjoyed your journey through this lovers encounter, a fine 10 liner for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you for the read and feedback. So pleased you enjoyed the write. xxx
