Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Melissa,
This is a well done cinquain that personifies the moon well. I like that it seems to sing a comforting lullaby to the woman in the picture.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

Hello Joan. Thanks so much!!! I really appreciate you!

Melissa

reply by dragonpoet on 10-Oct-2023

You are most kindly welcome, Melissa. Right back at you.
Joan

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I like the picture you paired with the poem, it suits the poem.
Good use of imagery in your poem. I like the word choices you used to convey the imagery.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you so much.

Melissa

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you so much.

Melissa

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 8 votes!

I like to moon graze when la Luna is full . It relaxes me . I also read that it inspire, promotes creative flow in writers( biggrin).

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you so much, Franca!

reply by tempeste on 28-Sep-2023

☺️

Keep safe!🍀

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A beautiful cinquain poem, very well expressed and well presented. The word choice implies peace and serenity, and I like the near-rhyme. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Marvelous offering in this unique form of poetry. I had to come back and review after voting for you, mystery poet. Just beautiful!

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Sally.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images of the moon easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you Gypsy.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A beautifully composed cinquain to fit that magical image! A very pleasing sense of peace and calm but not sure about those two eyes peeping out from beneath the covers! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

I enjoyed the read of these words. It was calming, relaxing and soothing.
The poem is descriptive and creative. I pondered on these words and I
thought about the author's description in the last 3 lines of this poem.
I found it to be lovely. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

Thank you Maria!

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

A very exquisite picture. Just lovely. The moon controls a lot more than most folks know. It is for more than just gazing at. This is a wonderful blend of drawing and writing. One compliments the other.
Karen

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

Thank you Karen!!

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 27-Sep-2023

U R Welcome

Comment from JPGeo

Excellent

This is a wonderfully poetic Cinquain. It goes so well with the art like you wrote it after viewing. I believe you have a strong contender for the contest. This deserves lots of votes. Best wishes,
John

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

Thank you!!