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I Heard the Silence

a CinQuain

19 total reviews 
Comment from Raul1
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Looks like your on your way to winning this competition. It's beautifully written. A simple poem well written. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Good luck on the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
    Thank you Raul!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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What a beautiful example of Cinquain poetry. I love how you hear the tune within the silence, one that sings a lullaby to soothe you into slumber. Wonderful imagery.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
    Thank you so much, Ginda! Hugs.
Comment from JSD
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Lovely imagery and beautiful choice of language to convey this gorgeous picture. All contained in a perfect syllabic box. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thanks so much!
Comment from Jane Jane King
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I love this poem.It is so lovely and lyrical and peaceful. What a sweet way to drift into slumber land. the illustration is gorgeous and a perfect fit for the poem. Beautifully done.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Eleri
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I like the idea of silence conveying a tune although I am not certain how that can happen. This poem has all of the correct syllables for a cinquain poem and reads well. I also like the rhyming of 'tune' and 'crooned'
Good luck in the contest
Eleri

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These are well chosen words with a melody within and I enjoyed the peace and tranquility here as the silence evoked sleep and time stands still, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.

Best wishes!

Alexandra


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Douglas Goff
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What a fantastic piece of poetry. It is very exquisite how you managed to match the picture to your words, or vice versa.

This has a professional quality to it.
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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much!
Comment from mermaids
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Love your words. There is a magical feeling in your poetic form. I also admire your rhyming of words. I like the feeling of silence from the moon and how it brings forth a feeling of peacefulness. Excellent use of words that brings out feelings.

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
    Thank you very much!