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Moody Blues

Finding Your Muse Club Event - Work of Art

24 total reviews 
Comment from Lisasview
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I found this quite interesting... I have always felt that i am not writing... that someone on my shoulder is doing the writing... and, I do mean always... even as a child.
I really love the idea of the The Blue nNude inspiring you to write this lovely piece.
Lisa

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from nomi338
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For some broken vessels all that it takes is an opportunity to see themselves as whole individuals, beautiful to look upon, capable of bringing the joy of discovery to those blessed enough to see them.
I found this piece very inspiring.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you for this insightful review. I'm so happy that you felt a connection to my writing.

    Enjoy your evening.
Comment from bhogg
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I enjoyed this very much. It was interesting as how you structure as a real-life model coming in and in particular how she lets her mind wander as the poses. Great flow and pace. Bill

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Bill.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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An interesting poem that teaches us about your viewpoint on an artwork by Henri Matisse.
You looked deeply into the picture and tried to get into his head and heart..an interesting technique using paper to paint when he had surgery.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Rhoda.
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 30-Sep-2023
    You?re welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But every once in a while, I like to venture off to read and try deciphering a few verses. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you for taking the time to read my verse and write a review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Good picture. I myself can not draw a straight line.
My artistry is here with words, Here, yours are lovely filled with a love of art and Matisse in particular. Your deep feeling is evident in your language. Good work.
Karen

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Karen.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 01-Oct-2023
    I love the music of "Moody Blues". Karen
Comment from MissMerri
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A beautiful free verse, wonderfully descriptive and I would say you succeeded quite well in painting the picture of the artist and model as he created his painting. I didn't need the author notes to see what you were striving for. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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I like that you gave life to the woman in the picture by Matisse. You gave her a personality, a fragile temperament that needs healing, and the artist gives her a reason to go on. I appreciate your notes. Nicely done. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you, Carol for the great review and generous stars.
reply by Carol Clark2 on 01-Oct-2023
    You're welcome. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed week.
Comment from TPAC
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You go Romeo, emotional views, sweeping ideals, gripping and touching to the inner spirit. Can't be all right, those expressed account. But, this is in my opinion prevailing this work.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
    Thank you.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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love the ending lines

Portrait of blues
nearly complete
he offers a smile
his warmth
brightens her expression
uplifting the mood
her essence ~ his muse.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the review, Jake.