Making New Friends
Lessons learned on the street3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I am so glad you entered this contest. The story, true or not, needed telling. On the climb to the top many have tunnel vision seeing nothing that might stand in their way to being on top the mountain.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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I am so glad you entered this contest. The story, true or not, needed telling. On the climb to the top many have tunnel vision seeing nothing that might stand in their way to being on top the mountain.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you!!!!
Comment from kahpot
"Of shoes or socks many were lack." the only stumble in this well written read was this line, (would lack) both work but would seems to hold the flow, very well done, love the format you have written this in, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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"Of shoes or socks many were lack." the only stumble in this well written read was this line, (would lack) both work but would seems to hold the flow, very well done, love the format you have written this in, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Thank you - You are so very right, and I took your suggestion and edited that line.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Offering a helping hand to those in need is how we help our fellow men and it is what makes us human as humanity is what we should all remember and giving has more rewards than receiving, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Offering a helping hand to those in need is how we help our fellow men and it is what makes us human as humanity is what we should all remember and giving has more rewards than receiving, a poignant write for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Thank You
