Who Needs Enemies With Friends..
Story told from a female perspective to a friend that betray4 total reviews
Comment from Sabrina H.
Wow, what a powerful poem on being betrayed by your friend. I am glad to read that this is fictional and didn't really happen to you. And congratulations on the milestone post of 100!
Keep writing:)
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Wow, what a powerful poem on being betrayed by your friend. I am glad to read that this is fictional and didn't really happen to you. And congratulations on the milestone post of 100!
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
Comment from royowen
I can't imagine what would conceive of these particular circumstances, I must admit I have been betrayed but.nothing like this, especially since we've known people through their youth at school. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Even sup(p)er.
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I can't imagine what would conceive of these particular circumstances, I must admit I have been betrayed but.nothing like this, especially since we've known people through their youth at school. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Even sup(p)er.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
Comment from TPAC
Give us dirty laundry, kick when they're up, kick them when they're down: smile. I like the presentation of this, constant pounding draws ones interests.
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Give us dirty laundry, kick when they're up, kick them when they're down: smile. I like the presentation of this, constant pounding draws ones interests.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This definitely has the markings of truth, although you point out it is fiction. I guess it falls more under the category of 'poetry for therapy' except for it being fiction. It often has a rhythm approaching rap lyrics. Interesting share.
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This definitely has the markings of truth, although you point out it is fiction. I guess it falls more under the category of 'poetry for therapy' except for it being fiction. It often has a rhythm approaching rap lyrics. Interesting share.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
