Carer's role
At end of life, this is what a carer does8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a poignant write about looking after someone with a terminal illness, there is no release until they recover or the end of life comes, well chosen words here, carers do an amazing job, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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This is a poignant write about looking after someone with a terminal illness, there is no release until they recover or the end of life comes, well chosen words here, carers do an amazing job, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Lisasview
I find this to be excellent for the contest and you have my vote... using end rhymes even though the contest doesn't ask for that is in my opinion perfect.
I always do that... just feels far more complete.
I also love the clock image ..great choice and the colors...
Would you be kind enough to let me know who you are at the end of the contest?
Lisasview
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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I find this to be excellent for the contest and you have my vote... using end rhymes even though the contest doesn't ask for that is in my opinion perfect.
I always do that... just feels far more complete.
I also love the clock image ..great choice and the colors...
Would you be kind enough to let me know who you are at the end of the contest?
Lisasview
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you for a very fine review in every aspect, and I am delighted and honoured to receive six stars. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, I will let you know, probably tomorrow. And many thanks for the vote. I appreciate that greatly!
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You are most welcome..
Lisa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
It's excruciating. I'm so sorry you are going through this (or have gone through it.) And, worse, no words make it better. There is no salve for it. If we lived close, I would give you the best hug I had to give. Please know you are in my thoughts, Mystery Contestant. xoxox
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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It's excruciating. I'm so sorry you are going through this (or have gone through it.) And, worse, no words make it better. There is no salve for it. If we lived close, I would give you the best hug I had to give. Please know you are in my thoughts, Mystery Contestant. xoxox
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Many thanks Rachelle, for your caring review, and for the virtual hug!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt Contest. Good alliteration.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt Contest. Good alliteration.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, also for the good luck wishes.
Comment from JPGeo
The death vigil is a draining experience and you have expressed it well. I would add that there is a need to show love, respect and honor to those who have given meaning to our own lives. I hope this is the feeling at my bedside when the time comes. Peace to you,
John
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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The death vigil is a draining experience and you have expressed it well. I would add that there is a need to show love, respect and honor to those who have given meaning to our own lives. I hope this is the feeling at my bedside when the time comes. Peace to you,
John
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, appreciated. You are right, but I couldn't fit that into the short format.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I truly admire this role which must be so distressing. In my experience, death isn't pretty and can be deeply traumatic for the carer/observer. Your verse hits at the heart of this with poignancy and impact! And you have some lovely alliteration in that first line which is almost like the ticking of a clock. Thank you for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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I truly admire this role which must be so distressing. In my experience, death isn't pretty and can be deeply traumatic for the carer/observer. Your verse hits at the heart of this with poignancy and impact! And you have some lovely alliteration in that first line which is almost like the ticking of a clock. Thank you for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thanks so much for a lovely, and caring review, and also for the good wishes.
Comment from JSD
Goodness. A rather scary and heartfelt piece. An excellent 5-7-5, packing so much into the mere seventeen syllables. I just can't imagine being in this position but my heart goes out to you and all carers. x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Goodness. A rather scary and heartfelt piece. An excellent 5-7-5, packing so much into the mere seventeen syllables. I just can't imagine being in this position but my heart goes out to you and all carers. x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Very caring.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Carer's Role, has the proper formatting and sees the responsible position as a monitoring spot which requires all one's efforts in the last scenes of another.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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This 5-7-5, Carer's Role, has the proper formatting and sees the responsible position as a monitoring spot which requires all one's efforts in the last scenes of another.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much
