Unboring days
Care for body, mind, soul, spirit, and others10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Unboring Days, describes a schedule that is fully balanced to make the most out of this life, which has only one real stop at the end of the line.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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This story, Unboring Days, describes a schedule that is fully balanced to make the most out of this life, which has only one real stop at the end of the line.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thanks Bill. As always your insightful comments are spot on!. Always appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I like how your personality comes through with the word choices you made in this piece. I like how you created the entire day with some well chosen words. I really like how you compared the activities to how the world thinks people should be acting or what the world thinks people should be doing.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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I like how your personality comes through with the word choices you made in this piece. I like how you created the entire day with some well chosen words. I really like how you compared the activities to how the world thinks people should be acting or what the world thinks people should be doing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for all your positive comments. I greatly appreciate the review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
That image is amazing and is reflected so well in your hyperactive description of life on a typical day. Whatever you're on - and it must be more than yoghurt, fruit and tablets - please let me know so that I can live like you! Excellent post! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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That image is amazing and is reflected so well in your hyperactive description of life on a typical day. Whatever you're on - and it must be more than yoghurt, fruit and tablets - please let me know so that I can live like you! Excellent post! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Lol. The quiet (age-appropriate) days are the recovery days. Thanks so much for the great review, and for the good wishes.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your description of your day is hilarious, beginning with morning tablets with your breakfast. Your quiet days sound typical, but the scooter, bubble wand, balloon days sound exhausting, but like the most fun. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Your description of your day is hilarious, beginning with morning tablets with your breakfast. Your quiet days sound typical, but the scooter, bubble wand, balloon days sound exhausting, but like the most fun. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you, and yes, they are fun days, but slightly (or very) tiring.
I appreciate your kind review, and the good wishes.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Sounds good to me. I am disabled and spend most of my time in bed, so I wear mainly pajamas. Almost all of them are cartoons, Disney characters, Dr. Suess, and the like. One sister asked me why, and I said they make me smile. They are silly. What more reason do you need? Nice story. Karen
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Sounds good to me. I am disabled and spend most of my time in bed, so I wear mainly pajamas. Almost all of them are cartoons, Disney characters, Dr. Suess, and the like. One sister asked me why, and I said they make me smile. They are silly. What more reason do you need? Nice story. Karen
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Exactly ... whatever makes you feel happy. Thank you very much for reviewing. Appreciated a lot.
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You are very welcome, keep writing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with tablets included in your breakfast regime! Ha ha ha. It sounds like you have a positive attitude to life and enjoy yourself, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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You made me smile with tablets included in your breakfast regime! Ha ha ha. It sounds like you have a positive attitude to life and enjoy yourself, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Never has a regular day with regular activities ever sounded so good! A gift you have for expressing the day's joys and events.
I like the "playing Hairdos" event. I do that with my granddaughters.
A very nice entry with a nice picture beautiful backdrops. If I make one request, it would be to turn up the font so that older people might enjoy your work too!
You've done a great job, and it's a fine submission. Good luck to you and have a great night!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Never has a regular day with regular activities ever sounded so good! A gift you have for expressing the day's joys and events.
I like the "playing Hairdos" event. I do that with my granddaughters.
A very nice entry with a nice picture beautiful backdrops. If I make one request, it would be to turn up the font so that older people might enjoy your work too!
You've done a great job, and it's a fine submission. Good luck to you and have a great night!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you Lea for a super review, for the good wishes, and for the suggestion. I might choose a different font which is a bit easier to read.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nothing is more true than the last two words in this piece.
I laughed at this:
Should be exercises for the whole body, but ....
Because everybody knows exactly what that 'but' entails.
This was a fun enjoyable read. Thank you!
D
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Nothing is more true than the last two words in this piece.
I laughed at this:
Should be exercises for the whole body, but ....
Because everybody knows exactly what that 'but' entails.
This was a fun enjoyable read. Thank you!
D
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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I am so glad you enjoyed it Douglas. Oh yes we all know about that exercise thing - the significant little word "but ...." Many thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Claire Tennant
This is very cleverly written. The description of your day is easily imagined and should cause more than yours truly to giggle. I wish I had your energy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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This is very cleverly written. The description of your day is easily imagined and should cause more than yours truly to giggle. I wish I had your energy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much Claire. Ah, the energy is not always there, unfortunately. Takes me a day to recover from grandchildren days.
Comment from royowen
What a full day, I guess things change as we age. The things I did when I was young are completely different from my routine these days, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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What a full day, I guess things change as we age. The things I did when I was young are completely different from my routine these days, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thanks Roy. Yes a typical day now looks quite different from what it used to be.
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That?s true
