Dinner Delight
In appreciation of her skill. (5-7-5)7 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Lisa,
Congratulations on the top prize for this contest. We all have those special memories of our Moms cooking/baking for us. I especially remember licking the raw batter from the bowl with a spatula or licking the beaters.
Mark
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Lisa,
Congratulations on the top prize for this contest. We all have those special memories of our Moms cooking/baking for us. I especially remember licking the raw batter from the bowl with a spatula or licking the beaters.
Mark
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Congratulations on your much-deserved win.
A sweet and joyful read in tribute to mom. I bet that this brought a lot of memories to your readers about mom's cooking and family meals.
Best regards,
Mary
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Congratulations on your much-deserved win.
A sweet and joyful read in tribute to mom. I bet that this brought a lot of memories to your readers about mom's cooking and family meals.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely tribute here to Mom and a joy to read in your 5-7-5 verse. I particularly enjoyed your second line and those happy smiles make my day! Good luck! Debbie
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A lovely tribute here to Mom and a joy to read in your 5-7-5 verse. I particularly enjoyed your second line and those happy smiles make my day! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Ahh - the smell of a meal cooking when reaching home and walking into the kitchen. Hungry bellies are lured in, ready and waiting. This is a fun 5-7-5 for the writing prompt. The love of a mother's cooking is a memory to be cherished. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
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Ahh - the smell of a meal cooking when reaching home and walking into the kitchen. Hungry bellies are lured in, ready and waiting. This is a fun 5-7-5 for the writing prompt. The love of a mother's cooking is a memory to be cherished. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Dinner Delight, has the proper formatting and praises the often unheralded feasts that are provided by the chief cook and bottlewasher. Nice.
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This 5-7-5, Dinner Delight, has the proper formatting and praises the often unheralded feasts that are provided by the chief cook and bottlewasher. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
Comment from JT traveller
Cute poem. A lot of sentiment displayed. It meets the requirements. A fitting illustration for your words. Best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
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Cute poem. A lot of sentiment displayed. It meets the requirements. A fitting illustration for your words. Best of luck in the competition. Jacqueline
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
Comment from Eleri
I like your reference to magic and alchemy here and your use of the senses as cooking appeals to not just taste. Your poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest and reads well. Good luck with it
Eleri
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I like your reference to magic and alchemy here and your use of the senses as cooking appeals to not just taste. Your poem has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest and reads well. Good luck with it
Eleri
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
