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Fly high!2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Flying high could be referring to many things, metaphorically being successful or taking to the skies in an plane or even a bird flying high, not sure, but it sounds uplifting, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Flying high could be referring to many things, metaphorically being successful or taking to the skies in an plane or even a bird flying high, not sure, but it sounds uplifting, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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It means (in my poem) being successful. Thank you!
Love,
Kristen x
Comment from phill doran
Hello to you,
This is a good idea, but you need to attend to the second line. As I understand it, all three lines must rhyme, for example
Oh!
Little one, you soar so.
Go!
As the form has only a few rules, non-compliance would prejudice your entry I think. But, you still can revise the piece, as and if needed: so, good luck in the contest.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Hello to you,
This is a good idea, but you need to attend to the second line. As I understand it, all three lines must rhyme, for example
Oh!
Little one, you soar so.
Go!
As the form has only a few rules, non-compliance would prejudice your entry I think. But, you still can revise the piece, as and if needed: so, good luck in the contest.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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I edited the poem. See if you like it! Thank you!
Kristen
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much better - good luck with this
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Thank you!