Starry sky
Stars at night are picturesque12 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a very short but descriptive poem in 1-6-1 style that you have written for the contest. "Night" "cluster of stars shine bright". Very true. Brief and to the point. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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This is a very short but descriptive poem in 1-6-1 style that you have written for the contest. "Night" "cluster of stars shine bright". Very true. Brief and to the point. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. good rhymes.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. good rhymes.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Daylily
I believe this is a picture showing the Milky Way in all its glory. Your 1-6-1 entry relates very well to the starry cluster enhancing a night sky.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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I believe this is a picture showing the Milky Way in all its glory. Your 1-6-1 entry relates very well to the starry cluster enhancing a night sky.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from JSD
Lovely entry for the contest, although there seem to be two of the same! I'm amazed it was so popular. Yours is sweet and poetic, the stars like jewels in the sky.
John x
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Lovely entry for the contest, although there seem to be two of the same! I'm amazed it was so popular. Yours is sweet and poetic, the stars like jewels in the sky.
John x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Karen
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Nice and concise. Lovely picture. Karen
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
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U R Welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Starry Sky, has the proper formatting and basically says what it is as we read what it says what it is. Cluster of stars shine brightly nightly.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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This 1-6-1, Starry Sky, has the proper formatting and basically says what it is as we read what it says what it is. Cluster of stars shine brightly nightly.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from karenina
I'm fascinated by the imagery created in eight little syllables...
Seriously, my muse shuts down at the prospect of trying...
Reading bottom to top you have "night light"--
How cool is that?
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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I'm fascinated by the imagery created in eight little syllables...
Seriously, my muse shuts down at the prospect of trying...
Reading bottom to top you have "night light"--
How cool is that?
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
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Welcome!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice! Love the picture too! This is well written and a fine entry for the contest. It is difficult to create magic with so few words. You have done it! Great job! I see no issues with grammar, spelling sentence structure or aesthetics.
A fine submission best of luck in the contest and have a great night!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Very nice! Love the picture too! This is well written and a fine entry for the contest. It is difficult to create magic with so few words. You have done it! Great job! I see no issues with grammar, spelling sentence structure or aesthetics.
A fine submission best of luck in the contest and have a great night!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for the awesome review you have a great new too
Comment from Carlos' girl
Who does not love a starry starry night. It brings to mind the painting of Van Gogh. Of spirals and swirls painted across the canvas of sky
Thank you for your lovely poem
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Who does not love a starry starry night. It brings to mind the painting of Van Gogh. Of spirals and swirls painted across the canvas of sky
Thank you for your lovely poem
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
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Most welcome
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well, I love the picture of the stars in the sky.
The poem is well put together and offers a semi-clear message. By this, I mean ending with the word Sight seems to make some sense but I would have chosen another word to rhyme with night. This is just a suggestion.
I love a starry night and the title works fine.
Jesse
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Well, I love the picture of the stars in the sky.
The poem is well put together and offers a semi-clear message. By this, I mean ending with the word Sight seems to make some sense but I would have chosen another word to rhyme with night. This is just a suggestion.
I love a starry night and the title works fine.
Jesse
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much
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Yep.
