Goodbye Auntie
A poem in honor of her recent passing2 total reviews
Comment from JSD
You use the interesting loop form very successfully. The connecting words work in both lines, creating a natural and unforced flow. A lovely tribute to your Auntie. Well done and good luck in the competition.
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You use the interesting loop form very successfully. The connecting words work in both lines, creating a natural and unforced flow. A lovely tribute to your Auntie. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
Comment from Wendyanne
This seems to be quite a well written piece of 'loop poetry' that you have written for the contest. Your love for your auntie shines throughout this lovely tribute to her. Good luck!
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This seems to be quite a well written piece of 'loop poetry' that you have written for the contest. Your love for your auntie shines throughout this lovely tribute to her. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
