Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

It is hard to find the right person. I do understand. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I have spent time in the mist around orchids myself a few times. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2023

Comment from lancellot

Good

An interesting, surface level conversation the reader gets to listen in on. This could use more editing, and perhaps more depth, if that's what the author wants.

notes:

"Man, I felt again for that all trick,

-"Man, I fell again for that old trick,

Rights words and frequency

-Right words and frequency

"What mist crazy women?"

-"What mist, crazy woman?"

"Well, I found a bench and cried in silence and blamed myself for my stupidity.

-"Well, I found a bench, cried in silence, and blamed myself for my stupidity.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh no! More heartbreaks? You really should cancel that subscription! Isn't there some kind of fellowship group at church? I know - they're all old and married? Anyway, first take care of your heart. Thanks for sharing and glad you and the orchids could take cover in the mist.

Rights words (Right words)
"What mist crazy women?" ("What mist, crazy woman?"

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2023