Comment from
estory
I liked it. There's a wonderful surreal, dream like quality to the prose poetry here, and the images of frothy bubbles of color and golden fishes and the hunt for them is a wonderful symbol of the contemporary momentary fulfillment mind set. estory
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
Comment from
lyenochka
A thoughtful reflection! I like how you allude to that fairy tale about the fish that grants three wishes. People are always seeking their dreams and sometimes have to edit their dreams. But in reality, if some got their dreams, they may be disappointed. It's best to be content first and then seek those dreams.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2023
Comment from
Douglas Goff
My goodness this paints but a bleak outlook on the shallowness of humanity.
It does make one think about the lesser instinctual emotions though. The ones that put us on auto-drive and move us through life's little loops.
Interesting.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2023