Frankenberry
The Sequel contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Oh, my god that was amazing. This would make a good hour-long TV show for someone. It is simply the best slapstick, out-of-control hysterical story of its type I have ever read. Karen
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Oh, my god that was amazing. This would make a good hour-long TV show for someone. It is simply the best slapstick, out-of-control hysterical story of its type I have ever read. Karen
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Karen. If you liked this one, I'm sure you'd like other dumb stuff I've written then. Lol. I love to write action. Many times it's over little nothing thinks like this. Haha. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm glad you liked silliness. Have yourself a great rest of your weekend and thank you again.
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I see Sam Rockwell, and "The Rock" in the show. You have a good week.:-)
Comment from Aiona
Crikey. I'm outta sixes. Your descriptions are absolutely SPOT ON. I could visualize you and muscle-man running through my local Walmart, which is laid out EXACTLY like it is in the story. Wow. Who knew such a gripping story could be told in a mediocre supermarket chain?!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Crikey. I'm outta sixes. Your descriptions are absolutely SPOT ON. I could visualize you and muscle-man running through my local Walmart, which is laid out EXACTLY like it is in the story. Wow. Who knew such a gripping story could be told in a mediocre supermarket chain?!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Lol. I know, right? Thank you for the fantastic review and big six offer, Aiona. I get my kicks writing dumb stuff like this. Haha. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol this story is hilarious. It reminds me of slapstick comedies from years ago. You have described the scenes so vividly that I could see what was happening in my mind. Good luck
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Lol this story is hilarious. It reminds me of slapstick comedies from years ago. You have described the scenes so vividly that I could see what was happening in my mind. Good luck
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Wendy. I love writing ridiculous action stuff for some reason. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This was so entertaining and I laughed all the way through, are they that delicious? We don't have them in England and I don't eat cereal normally but I would certainly try these after reading your post, what a great adventure this was and I thoroughly enjoyed the ride, I reckon this is a winner for the contest.
One edit here at the beginning:
. . . inside (talking) to the lady who . . .
Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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This was so entertaining and I laughed all the way through, are they that delicious? We don't have them in England and I don't eat cereal normally but I would certainly try these after reading your post, what a great adventure this was and I thoroughly enjoyed the ride, I reckon this is a winner for the contest.
One edit here at the beginning:
. . . inside (talking) to the lady who . . .
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for the great review and for catching the goof, Dolly. I fixed it. I really don't buy them now. They're nothing but sugar but I sure did love them as a kid. Lol. I don't know why they made it so you can only buy them around Halloween now but that's how it is. They're sort of like Lucky Charms a little. Cereal with marshmallows in it. I really appreciate the gracious stars, Dolly. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
