Just Believe
He will always come.......10 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a sweet post, offering hope and reassurance in times of strife. Your poem, complemented by the fine visual, is inspired by your strong faith in God and creates a beautiful and stirring message. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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This is such a sweet post, offering hope and reassurance in times of strife. Your poem, complemented by the fine visual, is inspired by your strong faith in God and creates a beautiful and stirring message. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Hi Debbie,
Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind words.
Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from w.j.debi
This is an excellent expression of faith. He is always there but it is often difficult for us to see. Love the picture of Peter being rescued by Jesus. It is a perfect compliment to your verse to support your meaning.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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This is an excellent expression of faith. He is always there but it is often difficult for us to see. Love the picture of Peter being rescued by Jesus. It is a perfect compliment to your verse to support your meaning.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2023
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Hi Debi,
Thank you so much for the excellent review and exceptional comments. Have a great rest of the week!....Maria
Comment from gramalot8
Loved your Cinquain poem. I'm blessed to believe that our God is there and always there when we call upon Him for help and guidance. I know I have done my share of calling. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Loved your Cinquain poem. I'm blessed to believe that our God is there and always there when we call upon Him for help and guidance. I know I have done my share of calling. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Hi,
Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Have a great rest of the week!....Maria
Comment from jim vecchio
I never realized this site has so many talented cinquain poets, and all so diverse! I was happy to read your entry which glorified The Lord and pointed out our need for confidence in Him.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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I never realized this site has so many talented cinquain poets, and all so diverse! I was happy to read your entry which glorified The Lord and pointed out our need for confidence in Him.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Hi Jim,
Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful
comments. Have a great rest of the week!....Maria
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Many Blessings to you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem is perfect for a Sunday read. I caught some 'h' alliteration on emphasized words 'hears' and 'help' in line 3. I very much enjoyed reading this and the way it was presented with the art, too.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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This poem is perfect for a Sunday read. I caught some 'h' alliteration on emphasized words 'hears' and 'help' in line 3. I very much enjoyed reading this and the way it was presented with the art, too.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Hi Crystie,
Thank you so much for the excellent review and your wonderful
comments. Have a great rest of the week!....Maria
Comment from Wendyanne
Your faith in God is very evident in this short piece of cinquain style poetry. I have found that when I have really needed His help he has been there for me. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Your faith in God is very evident in this short piece of cinquain style poetry. I have found that when I have really needed His help he has been there for me. Good luck!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Hi Wendyanne,
Thank you for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Have a great week!....Maria
Comment from Sally Law
Good morning, my friend! This is such a beautiful and encouraging word in this form of poetry. Thank you! I felt it was just for me! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Good morning, my friend! This is such a beautiful and encouraging word in this form of poetry. Thank you! I felt it was just for me! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
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Hi Sally,
Thank you so much for the excellent review and your wonderful
comments. I hope you are doing well. You are always in my thoughts
and prayers. Hugs, Maria
Comment from lyenochka
This is good advice. When we are going through difficult times, we can't but help but think about out situation and worry. But God knows all our needs even before we ask.
One syllable count issue:
Try not to think about what happens (has 9 syllables)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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This is good advice. When we are going through difficult times, we can't but help but think about out situation and worry. But God knows all our needs even before we ask.
One syllable count issue:
Try not to think about what happens (has 9 syllables)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Hi Helen,
Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments. Thanks, also, for noticing the extra syllable - I
just changed. Hope you had a great day! Hugs, Maria
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Hi Alexandra,
Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful
comments. Hope you are having a wonderful day!....Maria
Comment from Jacob1395
I think there are many people around the world at the moment who are feeling that it is impossible to go on with the state the world is in. This is a powerful piece, which I think will touch many people. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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I think there are many people around the world at the moment who are feeling that it is impossible to go on with the state the world is in. This is a powerful piece, which I think will touch many people. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Hi Jacob,
Thanks so much for the excellent review and your exceptional
comments. I am so glad you found the poem powerful....Maria
