Vlad The Inept Vampire
Even vampires dream32 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol this is a very funny piece of rhyming poetry about Vlad the vampire. I enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme scheme and you managed to conjure up a picture in mind of Vlad and his antics
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Lol this is a very funny piece of rhyming poetry about Vlad the vampire. I enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme scheme and you managed to conjure up a picture in mind of Vlad and his antics
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Wendy
Comment from evilynne
That's very cute. Vlad wondered what it would be like to be mortal, but he opted for the vampire life. I guess it was in his blood (sorry, I couldn't help myself! Evi
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That's very cute. Vlad wondered what it would be like to be mortal, but he opted for the vampire life. I guess it was in his blood (sorry, I couldn't help myself! Evi
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Evi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
A nicely done Vampire poem about the original vampire - Vlad the impaler of ancient Romania where he terrorized the people of his land and was the origin of the Vampire mythology.
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A nicely done Vampire poem about the original vampire - Vlad the impaler of ancient Romania where he terrorized the people of his land and was the origin of the Vampire mythology.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Jake.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a cute poem with an interesting character. He considers what life would be like if he was not a vampire. He sees advantages to being human, but ultimately chooses being undead. Vlad is a fun character who doesn't seem evil at all. He is even worried about good manners when he takes someone's blood.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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This is a cute poem with an interesting character. He considers what life would be like if he was not a vampire. He sees advantages to being human, but ultimately chooses being undead. Vlad is a fun character who doesn't seem evil at all. He is even worried about good manners when he takes someone's blood.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Carol.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
As should we all these days, have misgivings about living with the living to see the way humanity is (mis)behaving. It's a wonder God let's us continue.
Well written. Nice poem.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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As should we all these days, have misgivings about living with the living to see the way humanity is (mis)behaving. It's a wonder God let's us continue.
Well written. Nice poem.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023
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Thank you Wayne
Comment from Motti Heppenheimer
This is really good. I love the rhymes, and the story is a great concept.
I really like the beginning, there's a lot of funny rhymes when Vlad thinks of what he could be if he wasn't a vampire. There's very little transition though in the last paragraph, and it's very vague why he decided he liked being a vampire in the end, despite having thought of everything he could do as a living person. I think the ending still works well in theory, and if it were less vague I'd like it a lot more. What are some things Vlad likes about being a vampire?
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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This is really good. I love the rhymes, and the story is a great concept.
I really like the beginning, there's a lot of funny rhymes when Vlad thinks of what he could be if he wasn't a vampire. There's very little transition though in the last paragraph, and it's very vague why he decided he liked being a vampire in the end, despite having thought of everything he could do as a living person. I think the ending still works well in theory, and if it were less vague I'd like it a lot more. What are some things Vlad likes about being a vampire?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you Motti
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning from getting cold Spain,
First read of yours as I do not remember seeing your name before today.
Really enjoyed the fun read ...
Lisasview
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Good morning from getting cold Spain,
First read of yours as I do not remember seeing your name before today.
Really enjoyed the fun read ...
Lisasview
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you Lisa
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You are welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Gloria ....
You presented sound poetic artistry in this poem with the vampire lamenting his life and then in the turn deciding that maybe being a vampire isn't so bad after all, despite a few bad habits or instincts.
It's entertaining, unique and a most enjoyable read. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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You presented sound poetic artistry in this poem with the vampire lamenting his life and then in the turn deciding that maybe being a vampire isn't so bad after all, despite a few bad habits or instincts.
It's entertaining, unique and a most enjoyable read. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you Gloria
Comment from jmdg1954
Very nicely composed. Glad had a lot to think about but in the end was just a vampire.
Well rhymed with a good cadence to read.
Was this a contest entry? Best of luck if yes...
John
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Very nicely composed. Glad had a lot to think about but in the end was just a vampire.
Well rhymed with a good cadence to read.
Was this a contest entry? Best of luck if yes...
John
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you John
Comment from Barry Penfold
A lovely and funny take on vampires. Good rhyming and love the image. Had a smile on my face while I read and that is a good sign. Hope others find it funny as well. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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A lovely and funny take on vampires. Good rhyming and love the image. Had a smile on my face while I read and that is a good sign. Hope others find it funny as well. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barry
