Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hello Author,
well done on your story. That would be a nightmare for anyone, that's for sure. When I read the last line, I thought that perhaps this was a true story. I'm glad to see it was just fiction. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review, Tom. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Yeah, had to make sure they knew it was just a contest entry. Lol. Have a great rest of your weekend.

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Good Lord Myrtle, I am crying. Effect? You've got it.
It is raw, filled with tension, loss, and grief. And not just your's, your child's. Impact? I'd say so. When the contest is over fan me, I want more. Karen

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023

Thank you for the fantastic review, Karen. Just look me up when it's over. I have a lot of different stuff you might like. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great rest of your weekend.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 12-Nov-2023

You know my name I do not know yours. You need to fan me once the contest is over. if you wish to swap stories.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

This was a haunting and effective entry for the contest. I am so glad to hear it was fiction. I am on the other end of Florid, currently in Jacksonville. Us Floridians have to stick together!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023

Jacksonville, huh? I live down in Tampa. Can't beat the weather down here. Lol

Thank you for the great review, Jim. I appreciate the stars and stop in, friend. Have yourself a great night or day.

reply by jim vecchio on 09-Nov-2023

Enjoy the day and the weather!

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

You were right. it did. wow. how sad and weird that your daughter had the same dream. A very good and original entry. Spooky, though.
Katharine
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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for the great review, Katharine. I was just in one of those moods. Lol. I'm glad you liked my sad entry. Have yourself a wonderful night and thank you again.

reply by pome lover on 08-Nov-2023

you're most welcome

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

I'm glad this is fictional as it is a very sad story. I found the story to be well written and I became engrossed in it right up to the end. I 'enjoyed' it. Good luck with this.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review, Wendy. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this sad piece.

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Comment from Raul1

Excellent

What an awful dream the family just had and thank God it wasn't true. It was just a dream. Dreams can be whatever it imagines. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Nice job!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Thank you for the great review, Raul. For the man and the daughter having the 'same' dream in the end, it really did happen to them and they were reliving it over and over in their dreams. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.

reply by Raul1 on 07-Nov-2023

Thank God it is over. I hope that it never happens to you all again. Forget about it and live for today. You're welcome, buddy!

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

It was all just fiction for the contest, friend. Thanks again.

reply by Raul1 on 07-Nov-2023

Okay, thank God it is just fiction!