Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very interesting entry you have. Actually, I have never seen wrinkled tights. Is that even possible, if they fit? A poem about Ballet will surely capture many parents and those who recall the pain of that dance.

well crafted.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Thanks, Lancellot, for the review, all the stars, and the comments.
Now, about those tights. Yes, it is possible to have wrinkled tights, especially if little kids put them on themselves. In that case, they can be wrinkled and twisted. LOL

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Ballet class isn't easy, much like anything else in life worth doing. It's good to see your name pop up and see you're still writing. It's always a pleasure. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Hi, Ric. I took a break, but now I'm back at it.
It's good to hear from you again, and I thank you for reviewing and for all the stars.

reply by Ric Myworld on 13-Nov-2023

Just glad to see you back. I was out of town last week and just got back to post my next chapter of Tucker. Glad you didn't post last week and I'd have missed you. Welcome back!

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

I love this. I would like to send it to my childhood friend with your permission. She is a ballerina and now runs her own ballet school based around inclusivity. Best of luck. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023

Hi, JT. Yes, of course, send it off to your friend. I think this little poem resonated with many readers because I was just notified that it received an "all-time best" designation. It is admirable of your friend to run a school based on inclusiveness.😊😊
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Comment from Jaye McNevin

Excellent

What a vivid picture you paint! You used just a few words to summarize what that child looks like she is going through. I once knew a prima ballerina and I never knew anyone who worked harder than her. Your descriptions made my toes hurt! Well done!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

I was so lucky to find that picture--it just spoke volumes by itself. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
I hope your toes recover. LOL

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

I guess each art form takes a toll in this case. I think it's the little toes stuck down to the end. Your poem speaks to me of someone who might be late for dance class and grabbed the wrong stuff! I see no issues with grammar esthetics, subject matter or spelling. And I wish you best of luck in the contest. Hope you have a great night!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

Thank you for your review; all the stars and well-wishes.
I will sign off now, and after reading your review, I will have a great night. May you, too, have a great night.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Lol how many little girls want to be ballet dancers but they don't really think about the painful side of it!! Dancing on tiptoes in ballet shoes!! Not great lol. You have described it well in you cinquain!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023

Thanks for your review and all the stars.
Yes, so many little girls want to be ballerinas. But it's a tough life! LOL

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Interesting.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023

Thank you, Raul, for the review, stars, and comments. I'm glad it was clear.

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Brings back so many memories of my ballet classes...Miss mademoiselle... wanted to be able to go on toe but that never happened...
Love the photo you chose and the poem is spot on.
lisasview

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023

Thanks so much for your review and all the stars. I was fortunate to find that photo. Let's hope we will be graceful in our old age because of having taken ballet. LOL

reply by Lisasview on 12-Nov-2023

Yes, lets hope.. but ballet did not save me from falling... too bad...
are we Fans?
Lisa

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023

We can be...I'll see if I can work that out.

reply by Lisasview on 12-Nov-2023

Thank you
Lisa

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is an excellent Cinquain. The little girl is adorable but she doesn't look happy. It must be those aching toes. This is a good one for the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

Thank you for the review, all the stars, and the good wishes.
Yes, you are right about the girl's expression--it must be the toes or those twisted tights. LOL

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I visualize a young girl in each word of your poem.

My daughter did a few years of dancing school when she was younger, but never ballet.

Best of luck in your contest.
John

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023

Thanks, John, for your review and wishes for luck.
I'm also glad to hear that the poem sparked visualization.