Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

- very thought-provoking poem
- good imagistic word choices
- a smooth rhyme and flow
- cool pic and colours as well

nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Thank you for taking the time to read and review

Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. I like the way how this poem progresses from being hurt to forgiveness in the last stanza. Overall, this poem is very good.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

reply by Baltimore Born on 13-Feb-2024

You're welcome.

reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ AND REVIEW

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

This is a powerful, moving, and touching piece. It stirs up many different emotions in the reader, but above all, it is inspirational. Forgiveness like this to someone who has done us so much hurt and harm is rare but it is liberating... as liberating for us as for the one who has done us wrong, and sometimes, even more for us than for them. A beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Excellent writing. It has good descriptions, emotions, and imagery. The photo image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it.

Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very thought-provoking form that you have written about death, and our departed ones. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a good week. Patricia.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review;