Cheats never prosper
An entry in to the 75 word flash fiction contest2 total reviews
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Oops! Well that is awkward. Makes you wonder what Martin will do next and whether our cheater will try to counter sue for entrapment. Its a good story given the word count rules but I am wondering if Martin would have used his Guilio persona to get her to pay for some expensive trip and then not show up just to teach her
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Oops! Well that is awkward. Makes you wonder what Martin will do next and whether our cheater will try to counter sue for entrapment. Its a good story given the word count rules but I am wondering if Martin would have used his Guilio persona to get her to pay for some expensive trip and then not show up just to teach her
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Good thought, IBD, although word limit didn?t warrant a deeper exploration. Thanks for the review.
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm getting old and slow. I didn't suspect that ending. Good job! This will probably reach to the top in the contest. I might as well give up on mine already. Keep on writing!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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I'm getting old and slow. I didn't suspect that ending. Good job! This will probably reach to the top in the contest. I might as well give up on mine already. Keep on writing!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thanks Jim; and appreciate the review. Please don?t give up though - I?m sure you?d have every bit as much chance as me of winning.
